I never read this story, but I have a deep respect for you for having morals. Not many people do nowadays.

Although I'm sad to see your writing go, I'm proud of you for sticking to your values and beliefs. It takes alot to do that.

I never read your story but I haou for working so ** something a then deleting it becuase it goes against your concience I have to say I'm very proud of you.

This story was one of the best. I truly enjoyed this. I wish you hadn't deleted it. I cried in some parts and laughed in some others.

i really wish u hadn't deleted it cause i would have loved to read it.but hey,it was ur story so i respect ur decision.

you're not deleting Into the Lion's Den too, are you?

I don't agree with it, because I think your logic is stupid (my opinion). If two people are married and both their hearts aren't in it, to me that make's the marriage null-in-void. What? They were suppose to stay together, be totally unhappy, and have their hearts call to another but they are unable to be with them? I'm sorry, but that is just crazy and I don't understand your logic unless you are just one of those people that enjoy's being unhappy.

Again, this is my opinion. And nothing I say with sway you any, I know.

I am very sorry you feel you had to take down this story, but I can understand your point of view even if I do not share it in relation to this story. Beyond it, of course, I share the moral. However, I have to say taht this happens to be one of the few truly original and intriguing stories I have found on the Twilight fanfiction database. I would have enjoyed reading it again someday. You reall know how to write a story: compelling plot, deep and interesting characters: both your own and those of Stephanie Meyer. Honestly I think the relationships you portrayed are not completely immoral. It could easily have happened, inevitable in the case of Jacob's imprinting, if the story had followed your plotline instead of what was canon.
As much as I will miss this story it is your decision and I do respect that. I like to hope I will read more of your work in the future.

This is seriously one of the best stories I've ever read!

Aww! No a cliffie. Is there gonna be a sequel?

B!! DIE SHANNON!!

Normally I comment every chapter, but I found that once I finished a chapter, I just HAD to go onto the next one. This story is possibly the best Twilight story I have ever read (apart from the original, of course). And the fact that you had this out BEFORE Breaking Dawn was released just amazes me. I completely adore this story, and am looking forward to reading the sequel.

<3
Ree

I LOVE your story! It is really good. i Don't have any critiques because it is amazing

ok I know the story is is done but I think that she should start dating him then find about Bella and the kids

oh i loved this story so much i cant wait 2 read the sequel !