wonderful^-^ its really great. keep it coming.
and + i cant wait for the next chapter to come up *waiting* :DD

It's kind of gotten to the point that I cringe whenever I see a High School AU for this fandom, but I'm pleased with this one so far.

The very fact that you actually did research is exciting enough in and of it's self. So many people just assume that Japanese Schools are the same or set their fics else where just so they don't have to try, so it's pleasing to see someone willing to do the work.

I also like the idea that this isn't going to be a terribly pairing centric fic or feature random OCs/Sues, so far anyways.

You also found a good and convincing reason for the antagonism between Shinrei and Hotaru and I can't wait to see how it plays out. I'm excited for the next chapter and hope to see more in the future.

O! I like, I like! You'sa got's to update soon, yo! I wanna see what happens next! (Yay Hotaru!)

ROFL i love you Hotaru! *runs and tackle hugs him* KYA! man i really like this. it's awesome! (yes, perfect to interrupt my crappy paper) I like the family history you've already got here. the last name thing was practical, originality be damned. Me, i just picked random last names, or didn't put last names at all when working on my high school fic (s). ...i wish i could write in past tense (sighs) rofl. anywho, i look forward to your transformation of this prologue into an actual story. *gropes Hotaru and runs away*

p.s. *saunters back* Shinrei can suck it. *nods* *walks away*