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idestroyuall 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abusefirst off 56 is way to old I'd do at the most 50. 56 is to old for a 16 year olds parents, second Gregor wouldn't get married because of his scars and then have to tell about the Underland which would one get him thrown in a looney place or two make his girlfriend mad because he hadn't trusted her, so Gregor and getting married to an Overlander wouldn't work, thirdly people in the Undeland would be having their kids around the age of 18-26 because that's just what people did back then, fourthly it's really hard to create an oc story like this because it's ati-gluxa which will make people mad and no one really likes reading about oc unless you take along time to describe them like Ari from POF, which is gluxa and a slowly devolped romance between Ari and Howard this is rushed if i were you I'd make this a random Overland girl and the son of gregor and luxa or just leave both of them out of the story and have it be some random underland boy. But this doesn't and won't work, this story really needs work.
LikeYouShouldKnow 2008-05-29 ch 2,	abuseAww. So cute. But if they fall in love, then luxa and greg can't get togethuh.
LOVE.you.LOVE.you.LOVE 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseNO CAN NOT BE ANTI-GLUXA! NO!
LikeYouShouldKnow 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuse56? Isn't that a lttle...old?