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Nisha Tsukino
2008-07-18
ch 4,
abuseHey, I noticed that you used the japanese equivalent of "let's eat" (basically) and, not to be rude or anything (I'm really not trying to), but you did spell it wrong. The correct spelling is 'Itadekimasu' the 'u' on the end is silent when pronounced.

Hope that helped!

-Nisha
The Group of One
2008-07-12
ch 17,
abuseGood luck with the computer. Don't you hate it when they mess up?

Love the Harry-neko nickname.

Is Voldemort going to appear at any point? Or the host club people go to the wizarding world?

Anywho, can't wait for the update!
sujoy
2008-07-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseikkitakimas is spelled itadakimasu. just an fyi. dunno if you want to change it, or not, but there ya go. it does sound like ikkitakimas when spoken fast, though... so I don't blame you at all! great fic, by the way. i'm such a fan.
storylistener
2008-06-30
ch 17,
abuseThis is a highly interesting soap opera. You explain the characters from Ouran Host club so well that even I (who has never read/seen a single volume/episode) can follow this with no problems. GOOD JOB!
FlitShadowflame
2008-06-22
ch 17,
abusehoney? it's been almost two months. don't forget about this, because it's amazing.
917brat
2008-06-16
ch 17,
abusewow so far this sounds really good...why do they call harry neko i mean what is cat like about him besides his eyes...is he going to have a cat as his Anguimas(SP) form?
JellyFish72
2008-06-09
ch 17,
abuse*bows down* I'm not worthy!

Seriously, I've only seen one other HP/Ouran xover, and it has NOTHING on this. I'm truly amazed. I... I have no words...

Hope your computer stops spazzing soon (boy, do I know what that's like... x_x)!

--(heart),
Stephi
YinYangWhiteTiger
2008-06-08
ch 17,
abuseOkies, word of advice on don't be whatever means put the new chapter on this one or we won't be able to review...
red-jello04
2008-06-08
ch 17,
abusewhat's wrong with the fics i love?!?!

there's always on hiatus!! well the two i'm mentioning will be put on temporary hiatus but still!! huhuhuhu i want to know now...
Fire of the lioness
2008-06-04
ch 16,
abuseI don't mind the angst at all. And I really don't like Kyouya! Better make him come around. Perhaps he could gain an insight in Harry's real troubles. That should humble that obnoxious prick!
FmaFan10
2008-06-01
ch 16,
abusem, really good chappy! please udpate soon!!
Grace Adreanna
2008-05-30
ch 16,
abuseAmazing, once again you have managed to write a story that leaves me wanting more. I need to know what happens like now. The only bad thing is I love Kyouya and I don’t want him to be evil. :( Anyway the rest of the story is amazing! So good job!
Steven Kodaly
2008-05-30
ch 16,
abuseOkay, you're starting to lose me: 'slave' card? How does one go from a birth certificate to declaring that someone else is a slave? While it may be obvious to Kyouya himself, the readers don't know how he came to that conclusion. Furthermore, is it entirely legal for Kyouya to be pulling this sort of stunt with regard to monetary debt? Further still, what kind of person is Kyouya? I hardly know anything about him, but you seem to be portraying him as some sort of clone of Malfoy Senior. Would he normally reveal that he was trying to get information about somebody, i.e. about the exchange students?

Kyouya wants to play games with finance, does he? The Malfoy family uses money as a marvelous tool, I'm told... Harry may not want to escalate matters, but Kyouya already seems to be doing so on his own; if the Hogwarts Crew doesn't show him that they can _crush him like a bug_ then he'll walk all over them until they do something messy.
Eternal-Bluerose-Mayu
2008-05-30
ch 16,
abuseGreat story.
purplekitsune-chan
2008-05-29
ch 16,
abuseYay! An update. Kyouya is so mean. I hope he gets his act together soon. No Nekozawa (did I spell that right) in this chapter though :( I hope his in the next one. Maybe after all the angst has died down you could have the Hogwarts gang meet his little sister. She's soo adorable! Hope to read more soon!
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