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| GillianRose 2008-06-07 ch 6, | abusethis is just so beautiful - River's dismay at going through her portrait so quickly - Mal's understanding, her guilt about the Maidenhead - very thoughtful and true to the characters :) |
| Arcole 2008-06-07 ch 6, | abuseOh, excellent!! These are really turning into little carry us forward moments. I enjoy them very much. Keep 'em coming! I like the interchange between Mal and River--it shows his sympathy and perception nicely. |
| Arcole 2008-05-02 ch 5, | abuseI did like you said and youtubed Gina Torres singing--boy, what a voice! I really liked this a lot. I am still personally devastated by Wash's death, but I really love what you're doing with these in showing the healing process for Zoe and crew. So nice. Keep writing them! |
| thisweirdness 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseI really enjoyed this. Poor Kaylee. Inara knew exactly what was wrong, as she always seems to. I particularly liked the making of the tea. You created a very vivid image. Great writing... Looking forward to more. :) |