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anon
2008-07-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was very good, you showed their characters well!
Poor Crowley...
BMT and SuperMoose
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseVery very nice. I love Aziraphale and Crowley's friendship. :)
~SuperMoose
Poison Jack
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseLol. Flood fics rule.

I am a bit confused, though. You keep calling Crowley a serpent, but then say things like 'he got to his feet'. So is he human-shaped or not? It makes the story a bit hard to read, 'cos I keep pulling myself out of it when I notice that. Maybe you should fix that up a bit?
ruff1298
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseCrowley and Aziraphale, definitely the oddest but one of the best friendships ever. Polar opposites in practically every way displayed as how they should be in this fic. Good job.
Aim
2008-04-30
ch 1, anon.
abusecool story! :)
Pandora de Romanus
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseSo cute, and so... suave. I loved it!
Hebi R.
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseMany bright shining smiles and thank yous to you.
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