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bookwrm389
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
That was...random...

But when you think about it, making Ed agonize over the source of a gift would probably produce FAR more interesting results than just pulling a normal prank on him!

Ed's funny that way... XD
Mei Fire
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
...I don't get it. (is very, very saddened by the fact that she didn't understand this oneshot and would love for someone to explain it to her.) D:
Phantom SunsSong
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
xD I love your one-shots. Now to figure out why my author alert for you won't work... I'm sure I put you on it!
Harryswoman
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
this was funny.
Simply Sporks
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
XD It's hilarious! “Hell no! He didn’t mean it like that! No, no, no!” I could never have thought of that...

~Lie-chan
Colonel Bastard
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
"Mustang hadn’t meant it like that.

Whump. Whump.

He couldn’t mean it like that.

Whump. Whump. Whump.

Could he?

Wizz. "

No, Ed, he couldn't! 'Cause AdventureAddict doesn't like yaoi! Right?! 0_0

"'Just had a bit of fun with the very willing Alphonse Elric,”' Roy said amusedly."

That's what she said.

You used a lot of sound effects! Sound effects make everything better!

~C.B.

(P.S. It's never too late for April Fool's!)
xCrimsonxBlackxBloodx
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
... I really don't know how you do it. I really don't.

Seriously, how can you come up the something so incredibly random?? Could ya teach me, 'cause that'd be really fun to be able to write something as random as that.

It's amusing to no end, too, by the way. I love it.

(dies laughing)
xCxBxBx
Maira Luca
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Whahah. So good. Roy and Al make the best pranking couple against Ed. They know him too well -snicker-

You're still perfectly portraying their characters. I still can't find a flaw -smiles- I don't know how you do it.

Anyway, nicely done. 'till the next time

~ML~
agent000
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Lol, that was quite funny. Al is just plain evil, hehe...but then, we all knew that he had that evil streak buried deep down inside, hehe. That's a very funny thought. Poor poor Ed, hehe. Very good, write more like this once you get the chance.
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