 ellie141516 2008-05-23 . chapter 10omg! this is soo good! it almost sounds as if he wants to be the secret admirer instead! can't wait to read the next chapter! please can you update it soon! |
 Lanter 2008-05-21 . chapter 10Derek is renting Casey a date, interesting idea. I can not wait to find out how this goes. |
 Leaf26 2008-05-21 . chapter 10I can't wait to see how this is going to work out...Update soon! |
 Leaf26 2008-05-10 . chapter 9Nice work. What a heart felt moment between sisters. I can't wait to see what Derek is going to do know...Update soon! |
 ellie141516 2008-05-09 . chapter 9omg! this chapter was soo good! i love that derek sabotaged casey's date wiht tevor! soo funny! i just wonder how derek will ask casey to the dance and also find out how they feel for each other! can't wait to read the next chapter! hope to read it soon! |
 Leaf26 2008-05-07 . chapter 8nice work... Update soon!! |
 dramacrazed101 2008-05-07 . chapter 8Post soon!! |
 Frogster 2008-05-07 . chapter 8Aw. Update soon! |
 Frogster 2008-05-07 . chapter 5Ha! Liked the etch-a-sketch bit. |
 The Queen Of Doodles 2008-05-05 . chapter 7The plot was great, the way you used words were just LOVELY, and overall, the story is AWESOME. One problem, though. The format of your fic makes me dizzy. Try clicking Enter when someone says something instead of using bold letters. It really makes my head hurt. Great fic, though. :D |
 Leaf26 2008-05-05 . chapter 7Nice work. I hope Derek does something soon before Trevor does. Keep up the good work and update soon! |
 ellie141516 2008-05-04 . chapter 7noo! i think that this story is really good! and you should totally write more chapters! i really can't wait to read more! |
 Frogster 2008-05-02 . chapter 3So cute! "Your heart is missing, your outlook dim, find your half derek, time is wearing thin" Great line! |
 Frogster 2008-05-02 . chapter 1Really good job! A few typos, but all in all a satisfying piece. I enjoyed your writing style and your choice of words. I hope you stick with it!
"The more you ruv someone the more you want to kill dem". Perfect line, perfect moment!
Update soon! |
 xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx 2008-05-02 . chapter 7i left an authors note in my latest post asking people to go check out your story because despite the fact that your new, its a great story. i highly recomended it to them. personally i love the story and think you should keep writing. |