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ellie141516
2008-05-23 . chapter 10
omg! this is soo good! it almost sounds as if he wants to be the secret admirer instead! can't wait to read the next chapter! please can you update it soon!
Lanter
2008-05-21 . chapter 10
Derek is renting Casey a date, interesting idea. I can not wait to find out how this goes.
Leaf26
2008-05-21 . chapter 10
I can't wait to see how this is going to work out...Update soon!
Leaf26
2008-05-10 . chapter 9
Nice work. What a heart felt moment between sisters. I can't wait to see what Derek is going to do know...Update soon!
ellie141516
2008-05-09 . chapter 9
omg! this chapter was soo good! i love that derek sabotaged casey's date wiht tevor! soo funny! i just wonder how derek will ask casey to the dance and also find out how they feel for each other! can't wait to read the next chapter! hope to read it soon!
Leaf26
2008-05-07 . chapter 8
nice work... Update soon!!
dramacrazed101
2008-05-07 . chapter 8
Post soon!!
Frogster
2008-05-07 . chapter 8
Aw. Update soon!
Frogster
2008-05-07 . chapter 5
Ha! Liked the etch-a-sketch bit.
The Queen Of Doodles
2008-05-05 . chapter 7
The plot was great, the way you used words were just LOVELY, and overall, the story is AWESOME. One problem, though. The format of your fic makes me dizzy. Try clicking Enter when someone says something instead of using bold letters. It really makes my head hurt. Great fic, though. :D
Leaf26
2008-05-05 . chapter 7
Nice work. I hope Derek does something soon before Trevor does. Keep up the good work and update soon!
ellie141516
2008-05-04 . chapter 7
noo! i think that this story is really good! and you should totally write more chapters! i really can't wait to read more!
Frogster
2008-05-02 . chapter 3
So cute! "Your heart is missing, your outlook dim, find your half derek, time is wearing thin" Great line!
Frogster
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
Really good job! A few typos, but all in all a satisfying piece. I enjoyed your writing style and your choice of words. I hope you stick with it!

"The more you ruv someone the more you want to kill dem". Perfect line, perfect moment!

Update soon!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx
2008-05-02 . chapter 7
i left an authors note in my latest post asking people to go check out your story because despite the fact that your new, its a great story. i highly recomended it to them. personally i love the story and think you should keep writing.
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