Awe so sweet I love the interaction the worry the hidden feelings

nice

I love the subtlety of your FF, great job in showing that Jazz and Prowl are close and have the potential to grow even closer. And that's just achieved with hints, you don't go bludgeon the readers with an overly emotional display, no OOC; very nicely done.

But I'm a little sad as well, because, to me, it feels as if those two are tiptoeing around each other, especially with the last sentences at the end, which add Prowls POV - but there is a sequel, as far as I know...

But even if there were none, that hint of bittersweet and a promise for a potential future (or maybe not) makes it perfect in it's own right. Great work!

Total awsomeness.

C.D.

Total awsomeness.

C.D.

I like a Prowl/Jazz fic.

C.D.

Very interesting.

C.D.

You really have a way with generating sympathy for poor Jazz and Prowl, and I liked how you wrote the cassettes :)

That story was really good. I'm sad that it's to an end through. This is one of the best stories I read about Prowl and Jazz. Most of them are slash but this wasn't so I was pleased.;)

Keep up the good work and writing,

WATCHER

I'm glad Prowler is good.:) *gives Prowl a hug*

That was a vary good chapter.;)

Pretty good chapter, poor Prowl through.

This is really good! I can't wait to read the next chapters!

Aw... That was... Amazing! -sniffs- I was so terrified for Prowler! And Jazz! - Yer good! Awesome job!

That's a good fic!

It's just scraped into my list of faves

"friends" huh? So cute