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TheKritty
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
That was GREAT! Loved the angst and the fight of them! At first I was a little bit confused, with Sam cracking like that and becoming all violent and...huh. But I've re-read parts of it and nowI see it.But, man!One has to love Dean, annoying or not *lol*

"Forget it, you sex addict. Reap what you sow"
--> the humor you throw into the story, I laughed my butt of!Seriously, after reading some certain phrases I had tears in my eyes from laughing!

so,this was great (although I gotta say that I don't agree to all points of your characterisation,but it's fanfiction and it's totally okay for me and I loved this story!).

WELL done!
Kritty
Stoneage Woman
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Dude, this was great; hilarious and angsty and everything in between. I loved your description of the fight in particular...well done. :D
Marlowe97
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Woa, this was aweome! Funny and smart and then - yeah! Two nice young men fighting... Yeehaw!
And I even get that Sam is annoyed, can't really figure out why.. .really good.
"Go to hell" - yes, that would be really a punch to the balls... Great read - could happen in season 5 - and yes, please, exactly THAT fight :D
Dimminished
2008-08-16 . chapter 1
Damn, you're good. Brilliant is more like it. Loved this to pieces. I wish the powers that be would seek you out to write for the show. That'd be awesome!
spinningleaves
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
Aww good stuff! Issues settled. And that was some serious violence Sammy!
Supernoodle
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
man, that was good. Boys will be boys!
Loved it - so well written and angsty and Sam telling Dean to go to hell, that hit the spot all right.

Thoughful and clever and sad and funny... Well done! x
Letting The Rain In
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Wow, that was awesome! Really well done! You got the characters down brilliantly and wrote a cracking fic. Cheers!
nannon
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
perfect. just perfect.
Tari Roo
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
You wrote a post-deal fic!! (and there was dancing in the street!)

I must admit to feeling just a tad depressed and anxious about Season 3 and pre-deal fic at the moment. But this... this was pure enjoyment. Sam and Dean beating eachother up. Dean flirting. Sam sticking pens in his brain. Sam getting punched by random dudes pissed at Dean. sigh.

Thanks Dragons. Tis beautiful!
Mad Server
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Your Sam and Dean going head to head is absolutely priceless. ^^ This fic is awesome, hilarious and massively in character as usual. Favourite lines: “Forget it, you sex addict. Reap what you sow,” and “Oh, here we go. Granny Winchester’s got her handbag out.”
Linnie McCary
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Love your birds, dude: "Back at the motel they’d tag-teamed on the shower, licked the wounds that wouldn’t wait, and packed the car around an albatross of loaded silence." Beautiful.

Yay! But I hadn't better know that woman at the table...
Trish62
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Seriously, the best dialog ever. It's so witty and true - I can't even keep up in my mind! And then there is the storyline, perfectly paced and interesting. I always love seeing your name in my inbox!
PADavis
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Oh, fantastic. Thank you for writing a funny and touching but mostly drop dead (haha) hysterical after Deal story. Still smiling foolishly as I type this. The girl in the library scene was incredible.

Phoebe
Merisha
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
That was absolutely brilliant! The humor, and the boy banter was so spot on I thought I was watching an episode LOL ;0) - and the fight between Dean and Sammy was all kinds of awesome! This story was so perfect, thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us! Going straight to favs!
Kind regards
Merisha ;0)
Ophium
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! That was so funny and sweet at the same time. I love it!
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