i love this story!! its so adorable and u made the characters just absolutley right!! great job!

I love it!write more if you will.one day,you'll make lots of money for these types of stories!good luck!^__^

D'aw :D

Killer story with a killer ending!

Loved reading it.

Nice and short.

aw u should make a sequel it wuz really ghud!!

um, I just want to make a small critique
It's "the cost was clear"

nice story ^^

aaw! CUTE! i love the whole love-hate thing.

Aww. So cute! Very appropriate ending though, in my opinion, even if they weren't together yet, they'll definitely get there. Seeing their interaction now, that is.

An absolutely awesome story. :D

THAT ROCKED!

Awesome story! ^_^
I didn't really like the way you put the sentences though... sometimes I mixed together sentences with the wrong characters. The ending was good though, even though I admit I wanted a kiss XD

lol , kool! but wat was 'The Plan'?

that rocked and It should have had a better ending

Alandra: well...it was a cute ending

Maliska: not has we expected but cute

Alandra: we don't usualy read PPG fics but this one is damn funny!

Sunny: keep it up

? I don't understand what the ending is.