   PrincessCutipie 11/27/11 . chapter 8AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! SSSSOOOO AMAZIN'! PERFECT! I'm all flustered out! |
| Haruka2007 3/29/11 . chapter 8 loved it :) |
| UnluckyWriter 11/15/09 . chapter 1 i love this story! its so adorable and u made the characters just absolutley right! great job! |
| Elli4ev 4/3/09 . chapter 8 I love it!write more if you day,you'll make lots of money for these types of stories!good luck!_ |
| ANON 8/8/08 . chapter 8 D'aw :D |
| Tomaszavenger 7/6/08 . chapter 1 Killer story with a killer ending!
Loved reading it.
Nice and short. |
| katheirne 3/8/07 . chapter 8 aw u should make a sequel it wuz really ghud! |
| ami 12/20/06 . chapter 5 um, I just want to make a small critique
It's "the cost was clear"
nice story |
| Within Rhythms 5/27/06 . chapter 8 aaw! CUTE! i love the whole love-hate thing. |
| Numinous Mist 5/14/06 . chapter 8 Aww. So cute! Very appropriate ending though, in my opinion, even if they weren't together yet, they'll definitely get there. Seeing their interaction now, that is.
An absolutely awesome story. :D |
| jawxdropperxeyexpopper 2/11/06 . chapter 8 THAT ROCKED! |
| Miss Yaya 11/30/05 . chapter 8 Awesome story! _
I didn't really like the way you put the sentences though... sometimes I mixed together sentences with the wrong characters. The ending was good though, even though I admit I wanted a kiss XD |
| Kuki Salazar 11/26/05 . chapter 8 lol , kool! but wat was 'The Plan'? |
| Funfact 7/26/05 . chapter 8 that rocked and It should have had a better ending |
| Gerao-A 7/20/05 . chapter 8 Alandra: well...it was a cute ending
Maliska: not has we expected but cute |
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