 Sazerac 2009-08-18 . chapter 1...
...I just have one urge to say something. Very loud. So I would advise on earmuffs before you continue reading, as it is too hard to restrain my inner fangirl any further.
KYA~A AKI-CHAN'S STALKING BEHAVIOUR IS SO FULL OF GLOMPING WI~IN AND IT'S SO AWDOWABWEE CUUT~E AND HIS NON-STIFFNESS AND E~BWYYTHING AND IT'S SO EPIC HE'S DEFINITELY FANGIRL MATERIAL~~
*comes in with cheap lightsaber*
"Die, inner fangirl!"
"Never!"
*glare*
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Besides that little skit/preformance, I'd like to say that this story seems to me that it is something unique (I wouldn't know, I'm extremely new to the fandom), and your writing style is just so well-chosen it seems to draw you in.
At the moment, my exhilarance seems to be hindering my ability to give comment to your story accurately, so I'll continue this my next review come.
But, it's looking great thus far, and keep up the good work.
~Nikki |
 ShiroSakuraTenshi 2009-08-02 . chapter 6nice! good job hikaru!! lol!! |
 RahXephon 2009-07-09 . chapter 5This fanfic suffers from too much exclamation marks and pointless dialogue. I suggest you slow down the pace. |
 terrorofthehighway 2009-07-05 . chapter 6 Nice, but why on earth was the Igo club having a sleepover near a forest? I can't see them doing some sleepover camp thing to do some bonding- what's the point in that? Go is a solitary activity.
I like Hikaru's mom and Akira's stalker tendencies. Always knew he had them! |
 SleepyPuppy 2009-07-05 . chapter 6lol look foward to a day when hikaru play against akira again. |
 Toraus 2009-07-03 . chapter 6Funness! I especally liked end when the phone hit Yun-sensei, that was awesome. ^-^ |
 Stargazer 2009-07-02 . chapter 3 aww |
 Stargazer 2009-07-02 . chapter 2 :) |
 aznblackhowling 2009-07-02 . chapter 6Man, I didn't see that coming on how Hikaru avoided playing Akira. Anyway, regarding Office 07, when you go to click that windows thing and go down to "save as" instead of save and pick word 97-2003 document. This way, it should save the file that can be opened in Office 2003.
When saving a new document, at the bottom of where you type the name of the file, pick word 97-2003.
I hope you will update soon again. |
 gaul1 2009-07-01 . chapter 6funny, good chapter, byes |
 firedraygon 2009-07-01 . chapter 6Heh, so amusing. I like Hikaru and Okumura's relationship, and Akira using his phone like that IS creepy -- I don't think you can actually do that from a regular cell...
Anyway, nice work. Please write more soon!
~fd97 |
 Vorpal 2009-07-01 . chapter 6Tengen is not "playing by reflecting your opponent’s moves." In the context of Go, the word has just two meanings--the centerpoint of the goban and the Japanese pro title.
Okamura's failed copying strategy depended on starting at the centerpoint, since it's the only fixed point the 180-degree rotational symmety of the goban--i.e., the only move that he couldn't copy, since what he was actually doing was rotating all of Touya's moves by 180 degrees.
Tengen is _not_ the name of copying technique (I don't think it has any particular name, since, as Touya demonstrated, it can be defeated quite easily). It was just Okamura's opening move, which was initially surprising because it goes against the conventional wisdom of Go (first the corners, then sides, then center). |
 yamina-chan 2009-07-01 . chapter 6It seems, I don't have to send you a PM about this story °-^
I'm glad that you were able to work something out.
And I realy couldn't help but laugh about the last part.
"What’s the punishment for attacking a teacher at Kaio Middle School?"
For some strange reason I think something like that would fir to Hikaru perfectly XD
Akiras chace atfer...well, Sai seems to be troublesome however. I wonder what they are going to do about it.
And I am a little bit surprised, that Hikaru realy is a Kaio Student. |
 Giselle Bourignon 2009-06-17 . chapter 1just finished reading the whole fic one more time. look forward to the next chapter. *_-
thankyou for the promise.
aki |
 yamina-chan 2009-06-03 . chapter 5Quite an unice idea, if you ask me.
It has an interesting story so far, and when I suddenly noticd, that there were no more chapters up to now...I couldn't help but look at the screen for about a minute, realizing that I -for now- have to stop reading.
I realy would like to read this to the verry end, since iis somewhat special. |