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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Love ur storie!

Haha, I would SO do the same thing she did :D!

okay i say continue it...it looks like it could be pretty good. good luck!

I love your stories, and I love Bella's 'inner voice'! :-P yayy Twilight!

i loved your story. it was so good. i loved how it was funny and romantic. i was laughing so much. XD

you have a great talent for writing. :D

i would love to find out what happens at their "party." lol

Great Job!

HAHAHA! LOVE IT!

Wonderful story! I'm so glad you've posted a sequel. You have a very smooth, fluid writing style that lends itself well to just about any genre. By the way, would you be able to beta my stories? I currently edit my chapters by reading them over and over until I'm cross-eyed, and would love to get another person's input. Thanks!

this story is so hilareous. i luv it!

really, really great story! I loved it! :)

Yay! That was awesome! You captured Edward perfectely, a thing most fanfic writers cannot do correctly..it infuriates me. Thanks for getting it right!

Beautiful ending! *claps* ))

Jade

KYA!1ONE

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LOL, sorry. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! XD

My fave parts were Bella's 'cereal-killing' and 'Mr. Smarty-no-pants Grumpy Tummy' saying, "Hah! You foolish human brain; it is apparent even to the lowliest of sub-organs that it is I, and I alone, who holds the power here! I shall conquer all! Bwah-hah hah-hah-hah!"

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Jade

Ya, I doubt that Edward could actually be fooled by that since he can hear Bella's heartbeat miles away (creepy, huh?). But it was still fluffy and adorable! I'm glad that fanfiction writers choose to write fluffy one-shots. Because honestly, the books don't have enough of them. Sometimes, they're just to serious. ::end review::

OMG this is some funny sh**. I LOVE IT IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE WRITING I WILL BUST YOUR DOOR DOWN AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE TILL I'M SATISFIED.