Reviews for Dreams Can Come True

cathrl
2008-04-30
ch 20,

abuseWow, that is some serious saccharine you've got going there!

Great fun. A beautiful presentation of just about every romantic fanfic cliche out there - from her unknown heritage to the miraculous conception within hours of sex to the inevitable twins.

I normally like my fanfic darker than this. And a lot more realistic. But the slightly tongue in cheek tone and the way you stayed completely away from fake angst made this work. Nice one.

nephedra
2008-04-29
ch 20,

abuseA bit of fluff with a serious Mary Sue indeed, but super fun nonetheless! Although I had to stop myself from gagging and simultaneously laughing so hard in the first few chapters. Mark was too sweet for me. It seemed so wrong. :P Yet, once I reminded myself that this piece was supposed to be that I was okay. The story is rich with details which makes an intersting read. Well done...and congrats Summer. You got your man. Lol.

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