This story is great! Is it the end though? i really hope not! I really would like to hear more on Edward, Jacobs, and Bellas story!
Thanks,
Kaitlyn:)

wow i did like this 1.
i loved the ending lol.
it would be good tocontinue to see were they finally decided to head?
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ive never read a AxJ story before and i gt to admit i am a fan =D

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i no im a little late reading this and people have probly wrote loads of reviews but ya no,
i gta admit im not a fan of jacob. i mean i like him and that but i din't no i just don't oh i don't no lol.
but i gta admit this was a superb chapter!
i love the way jacobs thoughts popped in and edward took advantages lol.

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so what ever happened to eddy and jaccob?

i like this, its cute...poor jasper

Holy crap! You stopped there?!?!?!?!?! You need to update soon or else I'll, I'll...well, I don't know what I'll do, but I know it will be bad. It may not be bad for you, but it will be for me! I became addicted to this story and it just stopped! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Your stories are all really good and I must read them!

I love your stories, and I am very happy that you don't take them as far as some people do (a.k.a. lemons) because it IS a private matter, usually not something one should write about. Anyhoo, LOVE YOUR STORIES!!

Ohh noes :( No more chapters

love the chapter El. you need to make more AtJ chapters

nice. I dont like Jacob. He needs to go die in a hole. I love him with Nessie but him trying to steal Bella is not Kool Aid

what colour is cool aid? I dont think we have it here in the Land Of Aus

"I gotta bone to pick with you!!" :D

Is it a waffle? I love that Word Elly :D waffle waffle waffle waffle :D WAFFLE

i would just like to say that all of your stories are increadible! you always ask for a review so i decided to post one. you area a very talented author and i just think that in your writing you dont destroy the characters like some other people do. you keep true to stephanie meyers true vision and added your own little twist. thank you so much for keeping me entertained for quite a while.

WHOO! I LURV this!
Please don't analyze me on the word "lurv".