Cait Sith is A. FREAKING. PUPPET! Why is HE affected!

Hahaha, poor Cloud.

A lot of spelling & grammatical mistakes. Need to take note of punctuation as well.

E.g.: "The respected hero’s of the world..." should be "heroes".

E.g. 2: "...doors were flying open people scrambling out of their respected rooms" should be "respective".

E.g. 3: “*&% %$* &*% #*$& )!*,” Red XI let out a string of curse’s" - should be curses. You don't need the ' there.

E.g 4: "People were to confuse with the current situation..." Surely you mean "too" and not "to", and "confused" not "confuse"?

Just a suggestion, try to get a beta reader! Find that having a beta reader helps a lot. Mine spots all sorts of mistakes and is threatening to charge me a dollar for every mistake I make lol. :

LOL, great story! Sephiroth handing out flowers was priceless, I cracked up when I read that the "FF8 group must've done it!"{

*opens mouth* *closes mouth* *opens mouth and tilts head at angle and raises a finger* *closes mouth*

Thats evil... cant help it,gotta laugh_*continues to laugh herself into a coma**hears mom say something about takin the computer away if she doesnt stop acting like a vegetable**immideately snaps outta it*Good torture-fic_Very funny.

ok odd, I laughed a little.

The whole playing with boobs thing was a little much, but the rest was hysterical. Did you watch Spaceballs before writing this?

OK that was weird but funny. This was great, especially the jokes about Cloud in Tifa's body *evil grin* Anywas, great fic!

*Eye twitches* Poor Vincent...Yuffie's cool but...Vincent...Waaaaaaaaaah! Oh well. Other than that one little problem which I will just have to live with this was a good fic.

that was good. i like it. "My turkey sandwich?" mighty keyboard. i like this a lot.

"'Are you an idiot?'

'...whatever.'"

Classic! Loved it! Heh, heh, heh... good job!

Sephiroth is Aeris' body ::shudders:: that is disturbing...you are going to turture him! ::smiles:: Sorry ::hugs sephiroth plushie:: anywho. Looking forward to bore disturbing stuff from you! bye

lol Hella Fuckin funny Shit man write more fics like this

That was some wierd, freaky confusing sh!t, I loved it _!