That's so sad! I read your other fics, and they all have this wonderful relationship between Edmund and Peter, and then this one was so different! It was wonderful to see something new though. But now I can't see if everything was fake!

Little side note: I saw your profile; will you still keep us updated on your original work there? And post links when it's done? If you publish, I'd be glad to read it.

A terrifyingly well written fic on a very different take on the siblings. It takes everything into account, and is rather scary in the plausibility. I know everyone is all for complete brotherly love, and I do believe that is how they were intended. But one of the fantastic things about Lewis is that his characters were rarely wholly explained and often not completely perfectly good. I am delighted to read such a great piece that takes this to the next level. Thank you so much!

I love this fic, it just is so out there, and so chilling. I would love to watch the video it was based off of, but the amv has been taken down. Do you have a copy?

Cold is right! This sent ice down my spine. *shivers*

That's chilling. I'd like to know what would happen if Ed found out. Or if Peter ever did come to love his brother, or if Aslan did something about it. A sequalish story?

-Dyslexic Nerd

So sad. *sniff*

Thats sad, but it was written really well. Good job, though I had the idea that Peter didn't love his brother back.

That's a very different view on Peter and Susan.

I never thought i would ever believe this. but you've written it in such a chillingly good way that im going to be hard pressed to think of anything but this from now on. Brought a tear to my eye.

This was brilliant, in a cold, dark kind of way. I can see why Peter would dislike Edmund and why he'd act like he didn't. It was an extremely interesting way of putting their relationship and I sort of liked how Ed and Lucy were none the wiser and Susan didn't want to tell them. It was a brilliant idea and you wrote it brilliantly. I really loved it.

This is *harsh* - ouch! True, though, that siblings don't always love and care for each other as they do in Narnia fanfic ;). But even so, I can't imagine anyone wishing a sibling dead like this without being a really terrible person.

When I first read this, I was chilled. Then I started thinking about how the story mirrors my own relationship with one of my siblings. He is always vying for my attention and love, but I always ignore him and give my attention to the other. This story really makes me think of what pur relationship may come to be or already may be.

I believe that Peter just can't think in that way about Edmund's near death (Christ, he was pretty upset), but this was so well written that I actually doubt my own convictions.

Bad english, sorry. Awesome work, btw.

Before I read this, I read your reviews. I also think this is very well written, but I don't agree with most of them saying it seems so unreal- because I, sadly, grew up in a very similar situation. I don't think I ever cared if my younger brother lived or died, and oftentimes truly hated him. As an excuse, my parents were terrible about comparing us to each other in our hearing, and I don't remember them ever trying to guide us through our conflicts with each other. (As a mother today, I know that you have to teach young children how to get over arguments and work things out without hurting each other's feelings.) My brother and I were locked into a relationship of competition, not mutual regard- even though it was very important to put on a good face in front of others. I see this as a warning to others. And it makes me think- do I still not care about my brother because of our childhood relationship? I am going to have to think about my life, and that makes this fic even better than you might realize.

That could make a great fanfic. I hope you will do one about that irrationnel hatred he feels about his brother. Maybe do something to change it. Have Lucy learn about...I don't know but it could really make a great fanfiction