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Spindle Faerie
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
ermm, well, because of the fact that friendship doesnt look like it's wanted by your friend... maybe she should just let him know that she's willing to wait, and that she's committed to him.
i don't know.
geez, this actually happening is even more depressing.
she needs lots and lots of hugs.
and someone to make her laugh.
eine.hexe
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Very touching and very realistic... I can feel Kagome's pain... it's terrific that you decided to leave it like this; it leaves the reader wondering what would happen :) Amazing story...

and the song is great, too. I didn't know many people outside of Romania listened to Romanian songs... I actually like the Romanian version of the song better, but hey... :) it fit perfectly in this story.
snapdragon
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
i like the insight to kagome, and the way you structured the fragmented thoughts.
however, the story sounded as if they had product placement all over the place :S
catch
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Do you think you could tell me what you did, finally? I find I'm in a very similiar position as well. I was totally like WHAT? That so totally happened to me, what an imagination! When I read your note, I realized it was a true story... I wil read your reviews again for advice anyway/... :)
toasty616
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
all i can say is that you find some way to tell him how you really feel towards him im sure he still loves her so much that he didnt want anything to happen to her maybe he just needs to know the depth of her feelings for him just talk about it ok?

My Best Advice and Wishes of Wellbeing,
MUHAHAHAHA GIRL
Amethyst Green
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
This was such a sad story D: What was the name of this song?
Supergal2005
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
What happened with your friend? Is there going to be a sequel because it was a good story?
jenni
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
i don't think there's anything wrong with wanting to be back with someone you love, but if he isn't speaking to her, then i don't see the point in waiting around for the guy. if he's afraid of commitment, and his mind is set on being apart, then she there's nothing to do except respect his wishes to be just friends. get some closure and stay friends. you don't have to move on, but pining after someone is definitely not healthy.
Emori
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
My advice for your friend is to let it go. I know it hurts and she misses him, but she can't force him to be with her. It's tough, but it's time to move on.
KataangNutyBabe
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
Lovely one--sad sweetness. I don't know if the problem has been resolved yet, but I'll give a bit of advice anyway.

She needs to talk to him, NOW. Your friend needs to show this guy that commitment isn't a bad thing. He loves her? Good. First step checked off. She needs to tell him that being with him won't hurt her, that she's willing to risk everything for him, because she loves him. She needs to show him how much she needs him with her, that trying to not get hurt only hurts her, and that was the point of leaving her--protection from harm for both of them. To really protect her, he must help her by standing with her--it's too hard for her to go on like this and it must be hard for him too, if he loves her. Loving someone doesn't mean keeping them away, unless you're being hunted by terrorists or somehting serious. Maybe he thinks he has bad luck, maybe he's afraid of hurting her himnself through physical or verbal means--but either way, it doesn't matter. She has to tell him that she trusts him and loves him, and that he needs to trust her in the same way--she won't leave him for anyone else. Once again, make sure it's clear to him that this friend of yours loves him. I hope it all turns out well. God is loving her and supporting her, and I am too. :)

If this is already over with, I still hope this turned out well.
Blossom-flower92
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
hey i'm really sry 4 ur friend for what happened 2 her ;) it's really unfair how he broke her like this but if she loves him & he loves her in a wy i'll try 2 get some senses in him. i don't really know what i'll do if i was in her position but i can only wish her GOOD LUCK. hope ur friend & her lover will get 2gether :) bdw i like the story
Shannon
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
hey oh please make a sequel to this. i've read alot of your stories and i think that all of them are great. i think you are the greastest inuyasha fanfic writer ever.
Kayleigh E.
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
ok, i admit that i'm not great with this kinda thing, but it happened to me... sorta. one of my best friends is my ex-boyfriend(we went out for five months) we were always together whenever we got the chance, but when he started getting mean(like mentally abusive mean) i had to break up with him. he was heartbroken for a while and still says that he loves me almost six months later. we accepted these SMALL details and put our relationship in the past and now we are GREAT friends, even if it is a bit akward at times. tell your friend that right now she should focus on something that she loves doing, but doesn't involve her ex, to try to take her mind off things; if that doesn't work she should try to talk to her ex to see why he won't talk to her if they are still friends- he might think that she's mad/disappointed at/in him for calling it quits.
Masa
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
this is the first time i read your story. And it make me almost cry and felt lonely. I wish ...i have kind of love in my life.

Well...my suggestion for Kagome in this story (and probably for the girl in true story) is go on..chase him. Talk to him, make him understand. Quit whinning, don't waste your time. if you love him so much like you said... do something.


at last you can try again and again. And don't have regret in the future.

that's all.
shadow-inu14
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
There really isn't much that she can do but try and keep in contact with him and talk with her friends. Ad you as her friend should just be there for and help her get through this cause if they really love each other than it will work out one way or the other.
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