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| da-doink-doink 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful Job! Great one shot...altho are you up for making it a two shot?? Just a suggestion...Great Job! |
| Malvolia 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely little piece. So innocent and charming...I enjoyed it. Thanks! |
| Riverhawk 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, all the more so for conveying such emotion with a notoriously emotionless tense. |
| fantasyinmymind 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh...loverly. Could have danced all night with this one. |
| Singing Violin 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWoohoo, third person present tense! :) :) :) (Sorry, having a little grammargasm). But ... why do they have to say goodbye? And can't they at least say goodbye with a smooch? |
| Ayjah 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseTerrific one shot :) |
| LynnEGib 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI so wanted him to kiss her and go further like he thought he could before on their last night. I hope you write more |