Oh how I crave the eccentric and novel - and to have both longings sated in one sitting, or rather, one reading, is practically unheard of.

This was poetic and brilliantly executed, what with its lovely vernacular and innovative syntax. I want to throw you money or something, but I fear it would just bounce off my computer screen.

Alas - I shall have to settle on smothering you in compliments instead.

The wording was delightful. The sentence structure riveting. The vocabulary magnificent.

Very rarely to I have the urge to re-read something I just read five seconds ago. But I fear that is the case now, and I find myself praying fervently to every deity in the heavens for an update as soon as possible, for this was addicting, and now I desperately want more.

Wonderful job. Most definitely faving.

ah that last line made me go 'ahh axel fan girl squee'

i love axel taking kairi as his pretty little captive and this was written witht such a pretty flow to it. this fic really was a joy to read.

i hope you wriite more kairiaxels!

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*breaks keyboard*

HOLY ** JESUS, MISHEE, THAT WAS INTENSE AND SEXY AND PERFECT AND SHUDDER WORTHY IN THE FANTASTIC, MAKE YOUR HEART SKIP A BEAT OR FIVE KIND OF WAY.

I was just telling 'Nisha about my lost faith in my fandoms as nothing good has been seen yet, and then I got searching for my OTP and I FIND THIS HOLY GOD YOU'VE RENEWED MY LOVE FOR EVERYTHING AND THEIR MOTHERS WITH THIS, I'M SO SERIOUS.

It's just gorgeous and poetic and perfect in every sense of the word and all the things Axel/Kairi makes me think of when I write it. It's dark and the wording is just so. **. Amazing.

I want to quote like, all of it, but holy God, that'd just be annoying to you, I think.

THAT LAST LINE. **. I'M ACTUALLY SPAZZING RIGHT NOW.

This is just... GUH. STUPID FF. WHY DIDN'T YOU ALERT ME OF THIS SOONER?

I'd say I hate life, BUT I AM TOO BUSY SQUEE'ING AND FANGIRL'ING AND SAKLHKJFS'ING TO CARE, OMG.

YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY. THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY. I WANT TO GO ON AN AXEL/KAIRI SPREE NOW.

LORD, YOU'RE AMAZING. ♥

I-I don't even know what to say. You have taken my absolute favorite pairing in kingdom hearts and molded it into something exquisitely tragic & extraordinary.
This piece almost seems to sum up everything I love about axel/kairi, but it's an oh-so eloquent summarization. Forbidden and dark, a rush of blood to the head that you can never quite admit to.

Lovely. ♥

[ With his probing green eyes, he locks in on her (oh, the games we play while your hero’s off to save the day). ]

[ Heart shaking to the rhythm of an invisible clock.

She’s going to become a wax and wicker girl, he sees.

And what a pretty glow she will make; seashell glamour and oceanic light.

- - - -

“I’m going to make you burn.” ]

Okay, so I quoted nearly half of it, but those snippets made me shudder in a very, very good way.

Guh, this is fabulous.

Ooh...dark, yet great. And I love AkuKai :3

O_O...AH That was great!! Oh please for the love that is all of fanfic update soon!

Your writing is intense and almost poetic, and the wordings are unusual, but interesting.

In general, I like it.

♥