An interesting premise, i must admit i'd never imagined a croddover of this sort but you've begun well. I too would like to see where you are going with this. WuFei's scholar tendancies would make him a good canidate for the harper hall. But it seems that madam chang wouldn't be too happy with that. I'd like to see the boys impress firelizards unless you plan or making the paralell between gundams and dragons...and i'll bet the new fosterlings are others of the pilots but which ones...

The best recommendation I can give you for this story would be to map out what you want the main story line to be. It's obviously about Wufei and Treize and Milliardo trying to get his attention but decide what the main plat points will be who will end up with him and then fill in all the details from there. It isn't really a Pernese story unless someone at some point rides a dragon (I don't mean impress) So I guess just ask yourself where you want the story to take place; all in chang hold, going to the werys etc.

Also you need to make is clear to us who have read all the series when this is taking place. If you have fire lizards it's either in F'lar's time or back during the first falls.

This seems like an extremely interesting concept I'm looking forward to how it turns out! And remember this is a story your writing for yourself and are sharing with other people so write it how YOU want it else you'll give up on it half way through :P

I love it, I have been trying to find good crossover stories with both gundam wing and dragonriders of pern. I think it would be better if the chapters were longer but right now that is the only thing I see wrong with it. I hope you continue...