Really enjoyed this first chapter and am looking forward to following this story. I'm already intrigued about so many things ... Where did he go? Why did he leave?, etc., etc., which I'm sure will get cleared up in due course.

Great job! Look forward to chapter 2!

I am really excited to see where this goes and how the story plays out! Great job. :) Can't wait for the next update!

Great Job!

I liked the way you gave background to the story without being boring with details, details, details. Keeps the reader wanting more because the pieces didn't fall together until the end. When she said, "Edward's coming home?"

I'm looking forward to your updates!

Oh sweet love! I am so already addicted! Please update soon! I know you have more...

xoxo

jenniesmith

GREAT JOB! GREAT JOB!

Awesome first chapter and I can't wait for more! I love Emmett playing the big protective brother type!

I'm very intrigued by this first chapter. I can't wait for updates!

Wow, I really enjoyed this! You've done an excellent job of capturing Alice's personality. I can't wait to see where this goes.

I'm intrigued...please continue. :)

Ack! You can't just stop there, I don't do well with cliff-hangers- or with going to push the next chapter button and having nothing there!

I love it so far! :-)

very interesting! I like it so far. I'm curious why Edward left her if they are all human though :)

TM's suggested this to read.

I really like where it is going.

Gotta love Emmett. hehe

Can't wait for more. :)

I like it

I am so excited for you! You rock! The shower is running and I just ran in to check my e-mail for two seconds and saw this! Yeah! More later!

Love you!