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kayura sanada
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
Le lulz.

Loved it, before I go into constructive criticism. It's a great idea, and Conrart really does seem like the guy to be the the kind of brilliant person who somehow misses the obvious when it comes to personal relationships. Just wanna say, though, that you might want to consider losing the abstractions at the end and firming things down. Somehow the ending seemed to be missing something, some definite ending. Like it was waiting for something and you were so worried about ending it at all that you forgot to fill in the little holes.

Overall, it's great. Especially for a little half-drabble. ^_^ ConYuu forever!

-Kayura
pheecat
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, especially that Yuuri took action when it would have been so easy not to. It must have been especially hard since Conrad kept encouraging him to reveal his feelings to the woman (other person)...because it would have been understandable if at that point Yuuri assumed that Conrad had no interest in him (since he was encouraging Yuuri to go after another person.) So, yay to Yuuri for being brave.

The only thing I didn't like about this fic is that it ended! I would have loved to have seen the next scene, when Conrad goes to talk to Yuuri. Good writers make it much more vivid than my feeble imagination. ;)

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story and am off to read more of your works.
Sweet Symphonies
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
Ahh~!! That was precious. Yuuri is incredibly cute.
Thank you!!

Much Love,
Hana
reverseharem888
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
aahahahahah!! i burst out laughing at the end. Clueless..for all his perfection! A Good read:)
Shippygirl
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
I've been looking for a story covering the talk or a talk about dating. Well done! Conrad and Yuuri both felt in character.
sayuri2023
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
Lovely story, though you might have ended with a confession, but then, action speaks a lot louder than words. So,well done and if possible please continue
Serii-pyon
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
This is awesome~ *swoons*

-faves-
kingdomhearts222
2008-05-18 . chapter 1
this was cute. lol. Conrad can be so slow its so cute!
Pandora de Romanus
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
SO sweet! Congrats!
Sessho's Lover
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
That was really cute, I liked it.
J.Gabrielle
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
*swoon~*

Please write some more of this sort of fic... You're amazing at this! Admittedly though, I'd prfer the less detils and conversations and more of actions...

Keep writing!!
Animegoil
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
Okay, forgive me for saying this, but it is TERRIBLY cliche :) But, I'm still so excited and all ASDKhasuhda SO CUTE kfhwieaw *spazz more* Maybe I'm just in a giddy mood. Lol. I was totally expecting Yuuri giving him the poems and the flower :) But still. LOL, when Yuuri said 'kindoflikelovepoems' I had just glanced at the screen and saw that and burst out laughing and almost spilled my drink cause it was so cute and totally Yuuri to say like that
Sea Queen
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
that was cute and funny! ^-^ u should consider writing a sequel to this, u know? i think it would make another great conyuu fic of conrad confessing his love for yuuri!
ElvinaPotter
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
So Cute!! and so adorable. i really like all your KKM stories. is there a sequels for this fic? i'm eager to see how they start the relationship. Please make a sequel. Please!
Chelly-25
2008-04-29 . chapter 1
So cute!
That is all I have to say ^^
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