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DamageReport
2009-11-15 . chapter 11
There should TOTALLY be a sequal.
pizzabagels
2009-05-10 . chapter 11
This is an interesting story :) I liked how you used the beginning to conclude the entire thing, like it was some premonition that history would repeat itself the way Ryoma thinks in both beginning and end, "Not scared, just worried, that's all," and how the last paragraph was "Ryoma groaned in response...he knew that he was entering some sort of personal hell..." And it did repeat itself in a way. This story ended really well.

Just a note on chapter five, Buddha represents the religion Buddhism, which is practiced by a large portion of Japan. But everyone has their shortcomings. Like I really have no idea what a gigolo is.

:D Good job with this story! I enjoyed reading it as much as (i hope) you enjoyed writing it.
keep up the good work!
--pizzabagels
DarkAngel010
2009-05-04 . chapter 11
love
Miyuki Meiru
2009-05-03 . chapter 11
Goodluck Ryoma:)
Sheiryy
2009-05-02 . chapter 11
S'finished!?
D:
*Cries*

Anyway, haha, cute ending ^-^
Love this fanfic, especially chapter 8, I have a thing for cool guys crying :]

Write more RyoSaku fics!! ;D
FujixSaku0709
2009-04-30 . chapter 11
aww! That was so nice! Simple though, but it’s as if their journey hadn’t ended! The last part made me giggle :p Can’t believe Ryoma turned to a teacher XD Mou…you’re not going to put up fics in anymore right? Can you at least give me the links of your stories at LJ? :) (RyoxSaku ones of course XD)

I really loved this story, too bad it has already come to and end ^^ but still it stayed awesome till the end XD
astraldrop11
2009-04-28 . chapter 11
When I was reading the high school seniors part, I knew it. Haha. But this was awesome. The ending. Yet also the beginning of a "new personal hell" for Ryoma.

I loved this, all in all. I'm not trying to be a good reviewer here that praises you and stuff, but the ending was worth the wait, really. Perfect for the story, I can say.
yuki029
2009-04-28 . chapter 11
g-a-s-p. it's finished? aw D: i really want more and hahahaha i love the ending :D it's great :D personal hell? HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA naah Ryoma must loved it :D but... o. :( it's finished...
poems2songs
2009-04-27 . chapter 11
nice story... interesting ending... good work!
neko-koo
2009-03-24 . chapter 10
LOL!
Please update soon!
astraldrop11
2009-01-05 . chapter 10
That was short and you have no exucse there, young lady! *shot*

But I don't really care of that as of now. I just want an update since you left me (or us, whichever) with a cliffie!

The taking-Ryoma-with-her thing sounds real fun. Haha. Sakuno Fight-o!

Ohyeahjustupdatemmkay?


~Astral.
chiaki17
2008-12-31 . chapter 10
kya!

“Ryoma-kun’s mine.”

wah! *total breakdown* i can't wait for the next chapter! go Sakuno!^^
nicklaus mak wei xuan
2008-12-27 . chapter 10
good chapter!
Otakugal
2008-12-27 . chapter 10
when i read the second to last line..i was like: O_o?

update!
Sheiryy
2008-12-27 . chapter 10
YAY! YOU UPDATED! :D

Aww, poor Ryoma, he got knocked out :(
Haha, "Ryoma-kun's mine." XD
Sakuno's grown up! In about a week XD
Tomoka's OLD!
o-o
XD

Ahh, what's going to happen next!?
What's Ryoma going to say?! >.< Update soon please!

If it's Christmas, like, today, it was his birthday yesterday! He slept through his birthday! XD

Anyway, Merry belated Christmas and a Happy New Year! :D
Update! :]
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