| Reviews for Observed |
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blossom 10/3/12 . chapter 1 this had me giggling from the time i started to the time i finished. you are a very good writing artist |
Zak Saturday 9/20/12 . chapter 1Like it? I LOVE IT! |
shadow 7/11/12 . chapter 1 "You aren't my creator, you know. You can't make me do this." "No," answered Prowl, "but I can be a pain in your aft until you continue on it. If you want, I can hang down from the ceiling and stare at you while you eat, watch television, play video games and anything else you do. I can hide in the shadows of your room while you recharge and jump on you when you wake up. And all the while, I'll whisper in your audios about finishing this painting." NO! I want to see him do it noooooooooooooooo |
Tora tsume chan 4/6/11 . chapter 1don't you think that was, oh i don't know, stalkerish? it is completely hilarious but really? "If you want, I can hang down from the ceiling and stare at you...I can hide in the shadows of your room while you recharge...And all the while, I'll whisper in your audios..." Get the picture. Again funny but creepy at the same time...I applaude to it XD. keep it up. oh and I'm also doing a Prowl fic too. If your good at romance stories could you help me? Like read over it and tell me what you like and what needs work? Please, I haven't really done to many stories. Thx. |
Sparky The Tomboy 1/3/11 . chapter 1I don't think this is 's really sweet actually. I just love how Prowl can sit still for so long, that's one of the many things I love about him. |
JazzTheTiger 11/25/10 . chapter 1teehee! XD |
Falconcry 6/30/09 . chapter 1I can't stop laughing! That was a really nice work. "I will offline you while you recharge." LOL! You have me smiling at all of your works. |
EmpressPhoenix 3/5/09 . chapter 1Lol, I liked this, it was cute! X3 |
shimmershadow30 3/1/09 . chapter 1hhahahhaha Prowl and his awesome ninjaness rocks! ! ! love da story ahahahahahhahaha |
Diinya-chan 10/3/08 . chapter 1Prowl's a lousy artist, huh? (chuckles) You're an excellent writer. Keep up the good work. :) |
Krem 7/10/08 . chapter 1This is an exccelent story! I don't know why you don't like it! |
Trapped in Reality 5/23/08 . chapter 1This made me giggle many times! I like how Bulkhead kept the picture anyway. |
Cyndi 5/7/08 . chapter 1Bwahahaha, on, I love Prowl XD And Bulkie is so cute! *steals the drawing* |
Netbug009 4/30/08 . chapter 1Prowl's threat to Bulkhead made me laugh long and hard. Great dialoug in this. |
tomorrow4eva 4/30/08 . chapter 1Really sweet. And funny. Nice story. I like that Animated Prowl isn't perfect, even if he does have some awesome skills. It makes sense that if he's that good a ninja, some other development areas may have suffered. lol. |