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| DangerousDiamondDarling 2008-09-16 ch 3, | abuseVery, very, very good! Well done! I think the first chapter was the best but all of them are very good :D Ella |
| storm-of-insanity 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseThat was brilliant! I loved the mood and how it was so poetic :D |
| Rava77 2008-05-29 ch 3, | abuseTy Lee's chapter is my fav. Good work, very IC and intense. |
| Omnicat 2008-05-29 ch 3, | abuseHell yeah The Boiling Rock rocked. :D And so do these drabbles. This episode has me itching to write as well, but I don't think anything could top this. |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2008-05-28 ch 3, | abuseI like the insights into the characters, good job. |
| ClumsyTonks 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuseazula's chap. is my fave so far. :) but they are all wonderful! |
| daydream11 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseA true friend would love you enough to tell you when you're wrong. Good job. XOXO daydream11 |
| Wolfen Dreams 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseWow. All three of these are so incredibly cool and great and accurate and... wow. They are are really, really, awesome. |
| Oompasy 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseThe Ty Lee chapter was the best drabble I have read in a long time. Good work. |
| satinsilversnowflake 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusei liked all of the chapters, but especially this one! good job! |
| Anikitt 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseShort and IC, well written. Good job! |
| Forlorn Maiden 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseAww great insight on Ty Lee. Lovely. It does make you wonder why she, someone who admired Azula, betrayed her. |
| Forlorn Maiden 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI more than LOVE this. Azula's emotions feel like it's right on the dot. TBR did seem like she was really hurt by them and I love how you brought Ursa into this as well. |
| Ihdreniel 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseWow. I love all three of these, especially the first one. When I saw that scene I couldn't help but think that part of her problem was that Mai's words were just another reminder that all (most?) people felt for her was fear, nothing more... Great job. :) |
| YFate 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseThese are AWESOME! I loved especially how you captured Zuko's eyes through the locked door to Mai locked within the interrogation room. It was perfect! |