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ishotsherlock
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuselove the start of this story, cant wait to read more. love both sets of boxers, the shorts and the dog.
AKE:D
HarryPotterANDShesTheManFan...
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseohh what is it? please write more!
The Queen of Sin
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseo o o oo! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
csidle122333
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abusehey I like this story but can I ask what is with you and those boxers? lol anyway keep going lots of love. Sara Young
billiebeesaved
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseInteresting...
Sounds good.
Let me see what chapter 2 sounds like...so I can give my verdict..
Its looking very positive. :) lol
UPDATE SOON!! AND I MEAN SOON!
PJC
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it
Great story
P x
theyHAUNTme
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseAw, so cute! I love this story idea! Hmm, I wonder what picture he sent her...OOH, maybe it's a picture of an engagement ring with a caption that reads: Will you marry me? That'd be so adorable!:)

Anyways, please update soon!
cancsifan
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseDefinitely not insane. They are such visual people I can certainly see them doing this. Update soon though, want to know what Gil took a picture of.
22114
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! And I'm holding my breath for the next chapter, so you better hurry, cause I'm turning blue over here... :) I can't wait to see what he sent her!!
run4cover
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseWell, you seem to enlighten my days, this week. Where are all those ideas coming from? Don't let them stop.
Continue soon.
Kristen
2008-04-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseDefinitely liked! My favorite was the plant one. Can't wait to see what the picture at the end was...
Kristen
My Kate
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseoh...please tell me it's a picture of her new engagement ring sitting on her pillow located next to his...great story, looking forward to eavesdropping some more...please make her next picture one of the inside of the airport in SF...please update soon...
BrookeGreene
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseLol. The scene in the beginning with the whole 'Bruno's just a dog' thing reminded me a little bit of this completely RANDOM scene I wrote in the TLG sequel ... it's a little similar. Oh yeah, Sara's wearing Grissom's sweatshirt! =D I want to see that picture! Hahaha.

Lol. For some reason I didn't really see the 'TBC' at the bottom, so I was like, "Wait, that's it?! But I wanna know what picture he sent her! And I thought it was supposed to be a two-shot!" So I scrolled up to the top, saw that it wasn't 'Complete', then scrolled back down and FINALLY saw the 'TBC'. Or, well I saw it before, but it didn't really register.
SoS5-16
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abusethis is great, keep going. Its very real to life, my hubby & I do this sort of texting all the time!! :D
-Jools
VMLOV83
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuselove it.
can't wait for more.
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