now i can't stop thinking about eds leg. what was wrong with it...i know i wonder about the stupidist things ever.

... may i ask what exactly ed did? :D

I find it to be rather sweet. ^^ Good job.

oh, weird. i'm using the other laptop to check out your profile, i found some i have already read AKA this one, though i'm a little concerned if this is your effort at not doing angst, its a bit borderline, it might help you to try writing a humor fic, to sorta broden your horizens

Aw... That was cute.

Actually, I was surprised and impressed with the subtlety of it all. Much more realistic than most. I liked that.

that was good. you should definatly write more like this.
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Pretty darn good.

I love Parental Roy/Ed.

I look forward to more of your work.

Sg

OMG, This story is so cool, you have used amazing words and the language (swearing) fits into the story. PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE!