love it please keep writing stories kay

Sorry, I really loved your story up to this point, but what Tsunade did really ticked me off, particularly because I don't see what authority she has over Sakura and Kakashi's relationship. You mentioned in the next chapter that Sakura is of legal age and that there aren't any prohibitions against teacher/student relationship (which, I might point out, Kakashi hadn't been her teacher for years, so it's kinda moot point by now). Since Sakura and Kakashi aren't breaking any laws, then why does the Hokage have the right to rule over her subordinates' love life? Does this mean that if Tsunade objects to Naruto having a relationship with, say, Hinata, then she'd also be within her rights to break the two up as she pleases? Wouldn't that be an abuse of her position as Hokage?

It's kinda like having your boss at work telling you that you can't date your boyfriend. Not only is it weird, it's also none of his/her business what you do outside work. Unless your boss happens to be your parent/legal guardian, he or she should have no say over your personal life.

Tsunade maybe a Hokage, but even Hokages have limits as to how much authority he or she has over his/her subordinates' lives. Unless you want to give the Hokage absolute power (i.e., being able to decide who can or cannot marry), then Tsunade can only interfere with Sakura's relationship IF Sakura and Kakashi are breaking the law by dating each other, or if the two are endangering Kohona by doing so.

wicked so now he's only 12 years older than her.

LOVE IT! -adds to favorites-

I love this story its extremely good and I love the idea of Sakura and Kakashi I think it was set out very well and the plot was really good.
thanks for writing it its AWESOME

First story?

well, congrats! i would never guess that this one was your first!
i really liked it :)

A very touching story, I love how you described all the characters, kept them very much in character, but allowed them to develop somewhat during the story ass well.

I've just read through the story so far. I really hope for sakura and kakashi to end up together in a sort of happy ending kind of way. I always think they deserve that much.

I like the moments of comic you string through your stories. Maybe not so much in this one, but in many of the one shots for example.
Definitely worth reading. A shame it's already 1 AM around here.

And perhaps one short form of constructive criticism. Just something I noticed along the way. You seem to sometimes mix up 'to' and 'too' in your writing. In things as I love you 'too'. (too (double O )being used in the meaning of 'also' or 'as well').

Anyway I looking forward to reading the end of the story tomorrow!

I enjoyed your story very much. You're really good at writing lemons, that's something i suck at XD. Only sad that you didn't work the lemon with the teacher-student out. It really would have been cool if he really had bought her an outfit. But you're story was great, be proud of it

M lemony goodness. I like your level of detail, its as if its happening before my eyes. Keep it up, your good at this.

Wow... r u teasing us with the almost lemons? Because Im still waiting 4 something 2 happen.

y.a.y! somethings gonna happen

oh... this is getting good

Wow, I feel real sorry for Kakashi and Sakura. I'm not a real big fan of the pairing but they seem to come together real well in this story. Just to let you know you get Kudos and two thumbs up ^ ^. I love the story so far ^ ^ Keep up the good work.

I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS GREAT SO FAR!

I abso-freaking-lutely loved this story. I put in in my bookmarks for rainy days when I want to read a really good story.

Keep up the good work.