Love the way you've alternated POVs for the first time in this series. It's interesting to see things from Jimmy's perspective, and to view Mara's actions from a different angle. Great stuff, Reichenbach!

Yes! The Maraverse isn't over yet!

I really, really love these Maraverse stories - this is a character that deserves her own novel -so please keep writing! She reminds me a little of the Robin character in Frank Millers - the Dark Knight Returns. Wonderfullly complex characterisation, great dialogue, a superb interpretation of a supporting cast...Bravo!

Alright! More Mara! This story is really great, finally we get to see more of the little twerp brother. Please more soon?

The language was a bit excessive and turned me off slightly. Other than that the story was excellent. Who'dve thought Jimmy might someday be useful. Hopefully Mara realizes she's being overly paranoid about Jordy.