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| Dreamweaver 2008-07-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseOoh...I hear an additonal "it might even be your neck" in there somewhere. |
| Linnorria 2008-07-08 ch 9,  | abusehmm... it does make me a bit sad to see you changing Snape's character so much, I rather like him. However the other divergence points for this AU are extremely interesting in the ramifications shown. From what I can postulate, it's what might happen if the Dursley's treated Harry more like and unwanted pet or houseguests rather than treating him like an indentured servant as they do in the books. It's rather fascinating just how scary he's being right now. I assume it's because he's so furious with Dumbledore and the little fact that there are people wanting to kill him hanging around. |
| Dath Trinkle 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuselove it so far can't wait for more |
| imgonnadie 2008-07-06 ch 9, | abuseExcellent story so far. Please do continue to write. |
| PenRifle 2008-07-06 ch 9, | abuse*folds arms* It's been a while since you updated. Please tell me this isn't going to be discontinued! |
| Mother of Tears 2008-07-05 ch 9, | abuseWhoa! This IS a creepy story. Your Harry seems to have turned into one of the children in the "Village of the Damned." Do we want such a Harry loose in the Wizarding World? He sounds like another Voldemort. A main characters should be someone we can sympathize with, someone we care about. It is hard to care much for a character who cares for no one but himself. Stll, all in all, your writing is good. |
| bautschi 2008-07-03 ch 9, | abuseThis story is simply great so far. |
| Left Enthusiasm 2008-07-02 ch 9, | abuseThis is spectacular. I very much look forward to the next update. |
| Vera Vala Rose Velp 2008-07-02 ch 9, | abuseGreat story i Love haw your portraying Mr Potter. With voldemort, snape and dambels to keep to plot busy, ad to that Harry's own agenda this story is shaping out brilliantly. |
| SakuraCa 2008-07-02 ch 9, | abuseWow! Great chapter. I really love stories that feature creepy-scary like Harry. I hope you will keep up with that. Cheers. |
| Grimweld 2008-07-01 ch 9, | abusenice job i like were you are going with this keep it up okay. |
| The Librarian's Assistant 2008-06-29 ch 9, | abusenice story! interesting! |
| Auger1 2008-06-27 ch 9, | abuseAwesome story, love to see Harry lookin out for himself, please hurry. |
| gone119 2008-06-26 ch 9, | abuseGreat story so far! |
| misfit2008 2008-06-25 ch 9, | abusei love your story!! it similar to others i have read but its also got this... oumf to it... so great job and i cant wait to read more!! debbi |