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| Me 2008-10-03 ch 13, anon. | abuseUgh, too perfect! I tried hard but i couldn't find any mistake in your writting! The events flows naturaly, and the most incredible thing was how can you make the reader fell the emotions the characters are felling, i got happy ,sad, and even really angry while reading and i hope you continue this story! 10 A++ 5/5 stars |
| featherpen13 2008-10-02 ch 13,  | abuseOh my God...that was just...wow... |
| MathGeek1o1 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abuseThat was...wow. I enjoyed reading this. ^^ And thatnks for the quick update. I hope you update soon again. :) |
| Hotspur 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abuseSniffle, your chapters are so heart-breaking, so well written and wow...I'm just sniffling. Brilliant job~! |
| Kitty-Katz-Katz 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abuseo.o Oh. My. God. D; JINX! NO! D; |
| Fleur du Destin 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abuseHoly crap... This is killing me I wanna know what goes on! UGH! I LOVE THIS STORY! Fleur |
| cartoonstar 2008-10-01 ch 13, | abusetwo friends in fight mode, hmm, DRAMA! lol, priston is such a loser! awesome chapter, i cant wait to read the next one, please update soon ^_^ |
| gardensigernumbli 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseOH MY GOD EVIL KILL. but i think his name's psimon, not psitron. but still. THAT is an EVIL PLAN. you're a genius. cant wait for the next chapter! |
| RabulaTasa 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseCan't he just go through the door? He did it in Lightspeed, after all. -John |
| Fleur du Destin 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseOMG NO ! Lol sorry... This is torture though. (Beats Psitron with a stick) Ya pansy! but... (Gives cookies to neon rose) Awesome chapter! a very hyper: Fleur |
| TheMightyErrg 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseAww man! Totally awesome story. Almost worth the wait. But seriously update more often. Can't wait for the next chapter! I want to see how they plan on keeping someone with KF powers inside if he doesn't want to be there. |
| MathGeek1o1 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseNO! Well...that sucks. Can't he just vibrate through? Kid Flash has been himself the whole time! I kinda saw that coming, I just didn't think KF was himself since the day the two ran away. Great Chapter. Please update. ^^ |
| Hotspur 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseLost track of reading for a bit, but wow, this story is so incredible, that twist...wow! Poor Kid Flash, if he does vibrate out, Robin will know he's a criminal. If he doesn't, he's doomed. And poor Jinx! |
| featherpen13 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseI knew it! I knew it! KF was doing those things because he wanted to! Not because of the spell! I knew it! Ha! Hope you can update ^^ |
| KF fan 2008-09-30 ch 12, | abuseGood chapter. I kind of saw this coming and KF should just vibrate right through that door and out of there. Run KF! Run! |