Haha. Nice. Really liked the ending. I hope Ranma isn't just being with her to pay his debt. I wished he'd really fall in love with her as well. :)

Loved this x3

You know this is well written, but I must say Akane isn't that paranoid, and her cheating on Ranma, what the hell.

I love it! Very well written, very cute. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.

I also hate the ffnet format.

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The really sad part is, I can see pretty much exactly this sort of thing happening.

Good work on the dialogue. It's a bit of an odd fic in that there really isn't much of anything BUT the dialogue, but it seems that that was the point so I really can't knock it. Well-played for a unique way to present a story.

I'm always happy to read a decent Ranma/Ukyo story, and even more so when it's a good one like this story.

There's something about this fic that reminds me of Zen's The Bitter End, only without the bitter end... which can only be a good thing, as far as I'm concerned.

Short, but nice story. I really enjoyed reading this, and I loved the way you setup the fic!

Nice setup. There's only two styles that really work for one shot short fics and this is one of them. A lot of scenes cut up into short dialog describing a series of events over a course of time. I liked it, it's my favorite pairing, for what it's worth.

Just awesome in its simple story-telling, is what this is. Absolutely loved it.

I normally frown upon pairings such as this, but you made it work with this story! Though the title could be a tad bit misleading, it fits the story perfectly.

I like it!

2 hours? Wow. Wow. . . .wo.w.

This is officially one of the few stories that can make me like this pairing. Very good.

This was bittersweet, an extention of Akane's mistrust and Ukyo's friendship, both given time to mature and or fester. My only real misgiving is that I'm probably one of few i know who actually like Akane's character, but this is an unfortunate model of what could happen if she goes to far. Hence why bittersweet, cause the fic is logical and beautiful but the happenings between Ranma and Akane are just sad.

But at then end of the day it was an excellently told story and good to see something from you again.

-Himitsu The Hunter