Love the story it so much better than my own books I love this story so much thanks

really good story

ooh...frieza finally makes an appearance!

i love the fic so far, but the turning off the nerves thing, i think maybe every now and then you could say she made herself numb, or something like it.

she sounds like what every woman should be. strong, takes no shit from anyone. yeah!

YIKES! No wonder Jaden's tough, those creeps were so horrible to her.

Knowing the history is intriguing though. Nice work

Great fanfic! Intriguing and fun, you make some of the cussing and anedotes pretty funny too!

(Hysterical laughter)

Keep up the good work!

Haha, excellent story! Took me over a week to read it to be honest, because I procrastinated in reading it, but it was excellent. Augh, Naked Dodoria, EW XD

Ahh, Chestra is an excellent OC character as Diamonique was an excellent enemy. More like an annoyin' one xD

M long chapters, best thing from a very good fiction. Excellent job :D

Hello Sawnya like you I am one of the many great dbz fans out there. For your review I have had to think realy hard " and that was a bit of a problem" but I finally decided on... 5 out of 5, I loved it the truth is though a while back ago I lost complete intrest in it because Chestra fell in love with Zarbon and that is bad because I am one of the very few woman who are in love with Lord Frieza and when I finally thought Frieza found the woman of his dreams it was his daughter.

So I left the story, but then I read beauty contest and the beast and I had to finish reading this one and even though you you called Frieza a physco, made Dodoria want to... violate Frieza I just loved how each character was and all the humor in this great job.

p.s. do you realy think Frieza is a psycho I just think he has a hard time I mean he got his tail stuck in Dodoria's gum while it was still in his mouth give him a break.(me putting bandage wrap on Frieza's tail)

Hey! great story rea;;y liked it, could u send me the elmonier versoin PLEASE? aim: bluedragon6star
later

Amen and Aloha to that last sentance!
Fangtastic job on the story!
*hands writer a Zarbon e-plushie*
*as well as varies other DragonballZ e-plushies*
Enjoy!

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