THIS WAS A GREAT STORY I HAVE BEEN A BIG HE-MAN FAN FOR SO LONG I LOVE THE 1980S HE-MAN LOT BETTER THEN THOSE OTHER ONES THAT CAME OUT I DONT REMEMBER A SERENA ON THE SHOW IS SHE NEW OR SOME U MADE UP FOR THIS STORY AND I WOULD LOVE TO SEE U MAKE A HE-MAN STORY WEAR HE-MAN AND SHE-RA MEANTS MY OTHER PERSONAL FAV HERO SUPERMAN BUT MAKE SURE HE HAS ALL OF HIS POWERS I ALWAYS WONDERED WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPEN IF THEY WOULD MET ON THE SHOW BUT IF U COULD PUT HIM IN UR STORYS THAT BE COOL ALSO I DONT KNOW IF U NOTICE OR NOT BUT THE STORY ADAM AND TEELA ITS JUST LIKE THE STORY WITH KIM POSSIBLE AND RON STOPPIBLE LIKE HOW THEY BOTH GREW UP WITH EACH OTHER BEING BEST FRIENDS AND SLOW BUT URE ENOUCH THEY FALL IN LOVE AND ALL FOUR FIGHT CRIME BUT IN THERE OH DIFFERENT WAY LOL SEE U CAN SEE WHAT I MEAN

This was a neat idea for a story but a better beta would help you with execution. There were a lot of typos that interrupted the flow of the story. You didn't even keep character names consistent through the chapters - Reuben/Rueben.

Great job. Really nice story on what a person's actions could take them. Good or Evil? There is no fine line about it. This was a more serious story line on how a person faith could have wavered if their beliefs stem from either vanity or spiritual.

I love your stories! Don't stop writing them!

great work. I loved this story, you have kept me anxious to read every new chapter. the weeding scene was very beautiful, although it was a short scene, but anyway, simply wonderful story. i'm looking forward to reading interludes.

Another wonderful story.

Can't wait for what you have lined up next.

YAY! Loved the wedding! Sorry to see it's over, but as usual I enjoyed the ride!

*Sighs* lovely as always. I know you wanted to get this out but it did feel a bit rushed :). I would love to see a few more reactions to the wedding (the masters for example). I also wonder if there wasn't some other reason that both felt the need to get married quickly (clocks ticking anyone)? I'm looking forward to seeing how our newly married couple handle a certain dual life :) and how others are going to react to them. I also wonder if someone hasn't started putting 2 and 2 together to work out about a certain blue elf?

Great, just loved it!
cant wait for the next part to see how things are going.

Thank you for such a beautifully written story. You have kept me on my anxiously waiting each new chapter and in each new one have made the story even better. Great Job!

oh boy!evelyn ,you're an absolute darling!THANK YOU SO MUCH:) :) :)!

thank you very much. Great final. I will see for the next stories but i'm sure you will play with our nerves again (lol) but that's why we love so much your stories. Good luck for school.

I missed the wedding night. Could you put that int interludes?
But, so far I´m happy to read this fic. keep going.

*sighs happily at wedding scene* And it was nice to see how She-Ra handled Swifty's double life. I wonder if that was the first time Hawk had seen Light Hope?

Thanks for a fulfilling end to this arc! I do admit, I am looking forward to that future reunion of Keldor and family. Good luck with school, though, and I will (try to) wait patiently, for I know the next stories will be worth waiting for!

Berylium aka Kevona

excellent !!I really love this chapter. I'm sorry to have lost faith in you but i have expected the worst since a few chapters. I'm sad because i'm sure that i can't read the epilogue since i have return from my trip. Can you post it before sunday ? It cost anything to ask.