Amazing story, I like it and I hope you continue it.

I find your story to be very interesting and I hope to see where your going with this.

Well, I think your story is fantastic, for one thing. It has the potential to be very interesting. Your characterizations are good; Zuko has good reason to be suspicious of Azula. I also don't think I've read something like this before (where Zucest is done properly and in-character with a creative plot). Great work on that, too. I noticed that you only wrote this first chapter, and it was written in 2008. Now, I'm aware that you have a life, but I sincerely hope you continue work on this. It would be an utter shame if you didn't, considering it's a pretty good story. Anywho, I'm obviously not you, and I can't force you to update. If you did, though, I'd be really happy. After all, it's not very often that one finds a good-quality fanfic with a unique plot like yours. So, good luck with your writing, and I hope you update this story!

-An Occasional Fan of Zucest

This was just beautiful. There was something really sensual about their conversation. the way you described their being close together was perfect.

great opening, great chapter. i love that they are in character. it makes it seem more real. i look forward to the next chapter. hope its soon.

Wow, well done Youre a very good writer

especially the end was great writen

u gotta update soon! i wanna no what happens next!

Very well done. I have already added thios to my Zuko x Azula community.

Appreciate how you keep your cast in character. I look forward to future chapters.

its good but i really hate the couple i mean they brother and sister! but ur charachters pesrsonatilies r really captured well good job

An interesting idea, I'll be looking forward to the next update.

update till your fingers bleed, it's that good.
if you don't update i may be sad or something.

Amazing beginning, plus an interesting and original plot.

Love the beginning! I can't wait till the next chapter.