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| abeatticus 2008-07-25 ch 19,  | abuseI thought it was a good chapter. I've rewritten chapters over and over and never quite felt satisfied. |
| JoshK1o25 2008-07-24 ch 19, | abuseDon't beat yourself up. Chapters like this are important to the development of a story. :) Keep up the good work. And I will read your novel when it comes out... just let me know. |
| G-Matt 2008-07-24 ch 19, | abusePretty nice chapter. That "Phil Banks" part reminded me of that TV show, The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air. XD |
| JoshK1o25 2008-07-09 ch 18, | abuseWow. Cool story. No actually, a chillingly incredible story. :) |
| abeatticus 2008-07-07 ch 18, | abusegood chapter. I liked your description of Judy's pain, "As the medicine worked, Judy became drowsy, and the pain, while still there, had dulled a great deal" This reminded me of personal situation I was in. The pain turns into a dull ache but never goes away. I know it's not a very helpful review but it caught my eye. |
| G-Matt 2008-07-05 ch 18, | abusePretty nice chapter. Looking forward to more. |
| percy55 2008-07-04 ch 17, | abuseGreat story so far! Well written as usual. Btw I love your writing style, you are so very talented. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| Ying Shan Hong 2008-06-26 ch 17, | abuseI was thinking that maybe Judy would be ripped in half, yet she still lives. Maybe Judy and Samantha would be the only two that survives. |
| WriterOfAThousandWords.Bree... 2008-06-26 ch 17, | abuseURGH ! gosh i hate you. not literally. but you know what i mean, but i love the story ! i hate CLIFF HANGERS !! GAHH ! =] well. ok. enough of my antics. it was a brilliant chapter [as are all of your chapters, no matter how depressing] and i hope you update sooner than expected . =D =>Breezy |
| G-Matt 2008-06-26 ch 17, | abuseAll I can say is: WHOA! What an ending! This is getting exciting! |
| Ronnu 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseYour story is awesome! Please write more! Hey check out my story queen of spades.My first chapter isnt as long as yours but trust me its awesome! please review and tell ur friends! |
| abeatticus 2008-06-25 ch 16, | abuseI think it is a good chapter. It's full of a lot of emotion which isn't always easy to write...at least not convincingly. I thought you did a good job. I've used life experience in my writing before and it helped me really flesh out some characters. |
| G-Matt 2008-06-24 ch 16, | abuseNice chapter. |
| G-Matt 2008-06-17 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter again. Can't wait for more! |
| abeatticus 2008-06-17 ch 13, | abuseReally good chapter! It was well written and definitely left me wanting more. Depressing but a good chapter! |