 bandgeekcp24 2009-04-25 . chapter 5wow i definitely was not expecting a proposal! but i do like this fic alot! it's so stupid that you only have 20 reviews on this...pretty ridiculous actually. You should have way more.
Anyways I do really like this fic! Please keep going! I want to find out what happens! :D |
 Elf Dreamer 2008-11-16 . chapter 5That was a great story...
And Rin is just so cute |
 ak 2008-07-15 . chapter 5 great story ill be looking for that sequel :) |
 EternityZ 2008-06-24 . chapter 5XD So cute! XD They were about to kiss, and Rin runs away screaming. XD I can't stop smiling. SO CUTE! XD |
 Dimly 2008-06-14 . chapter 5YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Happy endings ROCK! *air punch* I loved how you made Maito fight Kakashi like that! It was funny! And Rin's reaction to the (almost) kiss was eveen better! I hope you make a sequel someday! :D |
 Jessie Immortal 2008-06-14 . chapter 5this story is so cute! usually i hate stories with OCs but this one is just too well written! update soon please |
 Super_Squeak 2008-06-13 . chapter 5 Cool story I like it but his name is Gai not Maito it is okay you may have gotten confused because in Japan your last name goes before your first name as in : Maito Gai, Uchiha Obito, or Hatake Kakashi I know it is easy to get messed up if I hadn't taken Japanese I wouldn't have known either just trying to help
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Hey I made a kitty :P |
 EternityZ 2008-06-08 . chapter 4Aww! So CUTE! Love this fanfic! |
 EternityZ 2008-06-08 . chapter 2Aww! SO CUTE! |
 ak 2008-06-08 . chapter 4 this is really good please continue |
 anbu10 2008-06-05 . chapter 4Great chapter. I don't really know what to think of Rin's mom yet. Though, she seems like she was trying. Guess I'll just have to wait for your next one:) |
 Dimly 2008-06-05 . chapter 4Yay! The mother has regained her sanity! She seems nice, when she's not half crazy. Now all we need is to convince Tsunade. Wonderful as always, X-sama! :D |
 Dimly 2008-05-26 . chapter 3Oh. A prostitute. Wow, didn't see that coming. Poor Rin...I hope it all ends up alright. Watch her have a brother named Obito-I'll crack up. Slap some sense into that mother! And maybe Tsunade, while you're at it. Thank you as always. :D |
 anbu10 2008-05-24 . chapter 3Wow. This is an amazing story. It's very diefferent than what I'm used to reading and I'm loving every word of it. I love how emotional this story is especially Kakashi's relationship with little Rin. Can't wait to read more :) |
 Shattered-Shinobi1313 2008-05-23 . chapter 3Jeez, Rin's mother is a whore. Update soon! |