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| Shotokan 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseI'm liking it so far but i wish the chapters were a little longer but that's me. As for writing the same line twice, they didn't. For some stupid reason it seems whenever someone posts a new chapter up, it repeats the first line twice..happens to me..verry annoying..anyway, good fic! I always love a good Johnny/Sonya pairing, especially the humour ones..I swear they'll hook up in the game on day lol |
| Tom from Down Under 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseThat was fantastic. your portrayal of emotion is superb. i am definately looking forward to the next chapter, to discover what this "movement" is. Did you realise you have written the first line twice? |
| purplestar213 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abuseYay! nice story! I like this pairing so much! Thank you for fixing this horrible mistake from the second MK movie. Keep writing please! |
| Tom from Down Under 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseA brilliantly catching prologue. I am looking forward to the story itself. |
| SkullsandRoses 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseVery well done! I love the Johnny CagexSonya Blade pairing so much, it's not even funny. You have a very good writing style, and the grammar is top notch. Update this whenever you can, because this story is off to a fabulous start. =) |