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Reviews For: Mortal Kombat: Amends

Shotokan
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseI'm liking it so far but i wish the chapters were a little longer but that's me. As for writing the same line twice, they didn't. For some stupid reason it seems whenever someone posts a new chapter up, it repeats the first line twice..happens to me..verry annoying..anyway, good fic! I always love a good Johnny/Sonya pairing, especially the humour ones..I swear they'll hook up in the game on day lol
Tom from Down Under
2008-06-15
ch 2,
abuseThat was fantastic. your portrayal of emotion is superb. i am definately looking forward to the next chapter, to discover what this "movement" is.
Did you realise you have written the first line twice?
purplestar213
2008-06-13
ch 2,
abuseYay! nice story! I like this pairing so much! Thank you for fixing this horrible mistake from the second MK movie. Keep writing please!
Tom from Down Under
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseA brilliantly catching prologue. I am looking forward to the story itself.
SkullsandRoses
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseVery well done! I love the Johnny CagexSonya Blade pairing so much, it's not even funny. You have a very good writing style, and the grammar is top notch. Update this whenever you can, because this story is off to a fabulous start. =)
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