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| murdrax 2008-10-10 ch 25,  | abusehmm very cool; chap[[y heheh looking forward to seeing how they hijack that bus lol!! |
| PrettyFanGirl 2008-10-09 ch 25, anon. | abuseSorry, didn't want to log in...again. Great chapter, although it was only the last two sentences that included the night bus. I can't wait for the next installment! Update soon! |
| cyiusblack 2008-10-09 ch 25, | abuseupdate soon |
| Krissy chrissie xxx 2008-10-06 ch 24, | abuseThat was excellent- I loved the way you described Draco! |
| PrettyFanGirl 2008-10-04 ch 24, | abuseOh, plot still getting thicker! can't wait to see what happens next! |
| cyiusblack 2008-10-03 ch 24, | abuseupdate soon |
| murdrax 2008-10-03 ch 24, | abusego harry steamriool over that lusy snake lol!! |
| Krissy chrissie xxx 2008-10-03 ch 23, | abuseWell I love you to and that desciption was just excellent! I really really loved it and actually I dont HAVE to be nice if there is nothing to be nice about I will just drop the subject or avoid it or sth like that! But this story is great, incredible, excellent, brilliant, written by the best author ever!, exceptional, splendid, superb, terrific, tops and like just about any other word in the thesauous for "this rocks"- lol. You actually have a great future in this! I LOVE YOU! I cant even begin to put into words how great your descriptions are because I physically cannot! Also yay you wrote my name before Ash's- obviouslii lol! ( In the A/N) And mii reviews are better than hers so there lol (arguing with myself again) ... I would also like to say that your vocabulary is great and I can imagine the settings so clearly and I love actually being able to imagine this when I read because for me it shows how powerful a writer is and how powerful what they have written is. And in your story I really could imagine it. So congrats! :) Ok here comes the soppy bit- I am so proud of you that it could easily bring tears into my eyes, we have such a close relationship as bezzies (not lesbien though obviouslii) so when you do something like this is, it is like I am a part of you so I feel really happy. And when you are sad I am sad also... Even though I REALLY do not like simultaneous equations lol- well ok they are not that bad. (ARGH- I think they are not that bad you are really starting to have an influence on me Becca!) But what ever happens I hope you carry on writing because whenever I read your stories no matter how mush you may insist that they are ok, I am telling you they are brill! Yay I actually never really thought the harry potter books were that great but now I have become like a blind man- well actually a blind woman who can suddenly see. How could I have ignored a world as wonderful as this before. But then again some peoples potter fan fics are like no but yours are like yes yes yes! lol (english persuasive device- use of three)! UPDATE SOON! Xx |
| PrettyFanGirl 2008-10-02 ch 23, | abuseAw, that' so sad on so many levels... gosh, I really love this story! It has improved so much since you started it! Update soon! |
| !@#$%^&* 2008-10-01 ch 23, anon. | abuseI forgive u (maybe)... update soon!! |
| !@#$%^&* 2008-10-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseNice story! love it! |
| murdrax 2008-09-30 ch 23, | abusewow what an amazing chappy and voldie is gonna be in for it when an enragged harry finds him lol! |
| cyiusblack 2008-09-30 ch 23, | abuseupdate soon |
| MeshiGohiku 2008-09-24 ch 22, | abuseok this is intriguging... |
| chrissie Xx 2008-09-24 ch 22, anon. | abusey do they invent reply throttles gr! Keep writing andupdatew soon! Xx |