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| Illyra 2008-05-11 ch 4,  | abuse'Sirius is God.' That´s so approbiate to the character JK has described. I really love the messages. Well done. |
| Illyra 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseAwesome! Wonderful description of Teddy´s feelings. Absolutely spot-on. |
| Betty Bent 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseI love you're story so much! It completely rocks! Keep updating! |
| Drusilla Braun 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseThis is really good. Great job. |
| TheSceneAesthetic-xo 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseoh i love this its great =) |
| zule bean 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| laura-csm 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseThat was wonderful! I love the idea about him and Jake in there, hiding, and all those messages, especially the main one: Give 'Em Hell, Kid! |
| equal-opportunity-candy-eat... 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseOh my goodness, that was so good. I was almost in tears! |
| laura sedai 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseAw, I loved this! Usually it's James II etc. who're the marauders II in fanfics, but I really like the idea of it being Teddy. Keep up the great work! =) |
| Dodger Gilmore 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseFirst of all, I loved Ron as a story-teller. Was really cute. Kind of adorable. Secondly, I really like your Jake. He's a pretty great friend, isn't he? With the whole being totally accepting of the werewolf thing, and knowing to carve in their names as well and that they'd need nicknames. Plus, he's kind of cute with his falling asleep all the time... Thirdly, the writing on the wall was a great touch. Wish Harry could've seen it, but he's not really spent much time in that shack just looking around, so it's quite believable that he never did. Loved James being so enthusiastic about Lily finally loving him back that he could barely write. Can't wait for more of this, I just keep liking it more and more! |
| Drusilla Braun 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseThis is great. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what Hogwarts does for Teddy. |
| Dodger Gilmore 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseThis was beautiful. I agree with Harry - this really was heartbreaking. I can see it happening though. Of course he'd want the chance to hear their voices, meet them, talk to them. Of course. And of course it'd hurt that Harry could have given him that chance, but didn't. He's way too young to understand why it might be better that way. It hurt to see him so mad at Harry though, and I'm really glad you had Ginny fix it. Great job, can't wait for more! |
| TheSceneAesthetic-xo 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abusethis was great i love that last line. |
| MBP 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseThis is heartbreaking. A perfect example of why we have to be careful about the stories we tell kids. Poor Teddy. :( |
| Fmh 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseThis made me want to cry poor little boy searching for his parents thank you for updating |