Great story

Great story! I really hope you can continue with it.

You're writing, while good, has left me confused on whether to like or dislike this story. I would encourage you to update so I could decide but it seems this story hasn't been touched in some months. In any case I will add this to my alerts just to be certain.

-P4L

Good story! Please update soon.

I hope you can figure out where you were going with this story as well, because it's a good one. I agree that this chapter was weaker than the others. Personally, I think the "bad" came from the focus of the chapter being on the first task, which is overall a pretty boring idea. A lot of it was dedicated to the preparation, and then the task itself wasn't all that exciting. Harry was actually clever, which ranks higher in my book, but it didn't excite me much.

Looking forward to more.

Sweet story, I can't wait to see how the second task goes! Oh, and the Yule Ball. Keep up the good work!

please continue...want to see how much jean kicks butt...and lord moldyshorts butt for bringing this on...hehe...

Yo. I really like this story so far. I began reading after finding the incomplete other story you based this one on.

Here's hoping the significant time since the last update is a sign of the quality of the next chapter, and not a sign of abandonment.

-demonicnargles

Very nice. I like the emphazise on the romance.

Hermoine and Luna make a good couple. They certainly seem more interesting than their canon counterparts...well at least Hermoine does. Luna was always interesting.

Anyway, keep it up.

Cool chapter

Cool chapter i hoped it wouldve ran thru this year faster

VEry nice story

I love this story none of the clichéd getting together with fluer but a definite original

Nice story, keep up the good work.

I absolutely love the first person writing style your using in this fic. Its not that big a deal, but do you plan on elaborating on how harry knows so much about magic, other then his own musings?(im guessing your going with the horcrux angle?)

This seams to have a great plot and is very easy to read. Overall i am pretty impressed, and really hope to see much much more.