im really enjoying your story... chapter 19 and going strong :) I really like this bit about Rookwood and the Department of Mysteries... I would've been cool if you had built Charlie's side up slightly to parallel Draco and kept me in suspense as to who would eventually triumph... a rival war if you will... it would have been fun but its still a great story and I'm looking forward to the date with Charlie

"Despite their bad history, and the fact that Harry had gutted him, Draco felt that he actually had a more than reasonable chance of winning the hand of the submissive."

Now that is determination. Most people would take being gutted for touching someone's arm as a definite rejection. I love how you prtray Darco!

I just thought I would review to say how in awe I am of your writing abilities. I have no words to fully express how I feel about your writing, really, and I'm sure you get this quite a lot.

I hope that someday I can grow in my writing to be as talented as you are.

Number, kupo,
August Blue

It's funny the things you notice when you re-read a story. I must have read this one at least five times, it's one of my favourites. For example, I really enjoy the sort of sales blurb you attach to various items - Scholar's Purse Plus, for one. They're small things, but with them thrown in, it just makes the story feel more real. I'm not being very articulate, because I really can't put my finger on what it is, specifically, which is so good about your writing.

I guess it's because it's so well balanced. None of the emotional side of things is too exaggerated, to the point of being ridiculous. The 'badies' are not one-dimensional, as often happens. They are complex, along with the rest of the characters. Every interaction appears well thought out, and realistic.

The story is just charming. It's witty and thought provoking, I could just go on for hours. I think I will stop though, so I can get back to reading it!

This is quite the well done story; I take it that Albion or Avalon or the British Isles are now secreted away from nonmagical contact, still under all those wards?

I have to say that after reading this story over the past two weeks, I am extremely happy with the end chapter. The main focus of the story was the mating of Harry and Draco, not Victor becoming king. I like how this last chapter flowed and it was artistically done.

I'd make this a longer review, but I got to go I'm getting kicked off the computer lols. I like what you've done with the story so far. It isn't the whole "OMFG I LOVE YOU LET'S HAVE BABIES" type of Drarry fic (Good Lord there are so many...). Nice plot.

Hope you will write more! ;D

-RoTF-

*faves*

good story, I like it

I really liked this story. Thank you.

Best. Fic. Ever.

Excellent story, really enjoyed the epilogue with its wrapping up of all the loose ends.

Must say when I started the story I had no expectations for such an epic like storyline. Introducing a future king of Avalon was definitely an amusing twist. My only wish was a bit more of Harry's pov in the end, especially when raising kids, but it was still a great story.

Thanks for the diversion you provided so I wouldn't get too bored at work and I hope you continue to write amazing stories.

I love this story, great job ^_^

i loved your story it was really good. i loved it. i hope that u write more.

yes. they kissed. gotta love it. lmao. harry losing control. this was a great chapter and i rather enjoyed it ^^

i loved dracos and harrys date. it was perfect. and i loved dracos viewpoint on the muggles and the education of them on their new wizard heritage. dracos answers really surprised ne. they were witty and well thought out (kudos to u for thinking them up ^_^) gotta love this story.