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| JimPamJAM 2008-05-31 ch 1,  | abuseI love this! I could picture Karen sitting at the fountain crying, contemplating how she had a whole future with Jim planned, and how it's never going to be. You captured her emotions amazingly. Great job! |
| gnbrules 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. My favorite part was "A piece of your heart Was always at reception I should’ve known better And seen past this deception" That ending sounds pretty sinister...:| |