oh god that made me cry! that's so sad! you wrote it really well though, and i thought that the part when he was trying to stop her 'leaking' was really cute. especially how he was thinking. i love it

Aww this ending was so cute! Fantastic job...again!

Yay LOL! The Dean/Lauren separation didn't go for too long! haha

that was good. really good.

i like how you focus on more than one topic in each of you fics; in this one you focused on the chuck e cheese hunt, the

'dean looses him memory' part, the part where dean is kidnapped by power-hungry, evil demons, and finally the most important part: the break-up/make-up

i just summed up everything you already know, so you could just ignore the paragraph above, if you'd like haha

thanks! really liked it! ...now on to the next one!

ID

Steamy ending, I can't imagine THE Dean saying those things but, hey it was a great ending to the story, really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and give us mere mortals more.

Great chapter, really enjoying your story. Now onto the next chapter

Excellent chapter, some action at last it was getting a bit mushy there for a mo.

That was so sweet, Dean all innocent and trusting, hard to imagine but you managed it, Really good chapter. Will get back to you after continuing to read.

that was beautiful. god u really like makin me cry dont cha!

"em-hem other clothes" was the best part of the whole story! i loved the story it was amazng! oh abd you were right to tell me to read asap! i wish i would have read it sooner! it was sexy! i love him! ans Sam and LAUREN! but most importantly i love the wonderful and amazingly talanted women that supplies me with a good read, and a little editing!lol

keep writing and good luck! :]

LOIS-SINGER

p.s. let me kno whats next on the agenda ASAP!

ily!

lovely, lovely lovelySDL

cool, hey, so, Dean and lauren have been together for 6 months?, well, i hope you will tell us more about how they decided to travel together. Well thanks for this wonderful fic, until the next one :)

is there going to be a series 2?

That's the end I was hoping for! You used my line. Winchester normal! YAAY! No worries girl. Use any line you feel like.

LOVE THE DEAN LOVIN. The boy so needed that! Great job with this and I am very much looking forward to your next fic. talk soon my friend.

Kris.

aw he was remembering how cute

update soon