These were so cute! (:

It's so like shika to get any woman he wants. :P

update soon. Loving everything so far!

xD

haha wow

OH MY GOD. HAVE YOU EVER WROTE CRACK BEFORE? I DON'T THINK SO. BUT YOU SHOULD. I LOVE THIS. SO MUCH.

Another lovely fic. ) I haven't read many KibaSaku pairings, so I guess I can't say much.

Just one thing, though.

"the right side of her mouth tilting up a little more than her right"

That little segment right there. Is it the right side tilting up more than the /left/, or the left tilting more than the right?

-deception

You should make a quiet ramen/tomato naruto/sasuke AU brother moment.. XD Imagine them in AU and they try to silently tell each other theirs is better,and they go into a fight with tomato and noddle shreds flying in the air until Sakura comes in with her favorite food. Syrup-coated anko dumplings. XD

IZ I LOVED IT. It was perfect. Sasuke was the greatest manager, and your own personality made Sakura such a realistic model. I loved the lack of quotation marks, the two scenes between Kiba and Sakura, with the repitition, and just, oh my God, EVERYTHING.

MM.

Love the style, no quotations, no basic structure, just evenly spread out sentences that fall out like gold.

AJLSDJFL.

Love how Kiba introduced his words with Hey-Hey everytime.

She turns around, and Kiba is grinning a little at her again, his left hand still running through his hair, fixing and spiking brown tresses.

Um, hey, Sakura says, Is there something wrong with the pictures? Do I have to go back?

Kiba shakes his head, Nah, the pictures were perfect. I just…yeah. You’re really beautiful, y’know that?

Underneath one coat of mineral powder, Sakura blushes again. You don’t need to say that. I’m not a model right now, I’m just Sakura.

And I’m not a photographer right now, Kiba says, I’m just Kiba.'

God, Iz, remind why I am the one you are collaborating with again?

Your Aer

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Dude, I haven't reviewed and this chapter came out on the EIGHTEENTH. Ugh. Slap meh.

NEWAYZ,

AWESOME dialogue; the lack of quotes made it so wonderfully better. I liked how it wasn't smack-obvious KibaSaku, but subtle and carried potential for their relationship. It all starts with coffee, haha.

Oh, I'm rambling. I miss you, man! (SOB.)

Sthupid Sthasthuke. He's hopeless.

i liked it. really simple.

great job.

OH, IT'S PERFECT.

*snuggles* KibaSaku is adorable sometimes...(especially since Sasuke is being TEH JERK! right now...)

You really made this adorable and cute and SO PWEETY.

I it.

hm...I'M GONNA MAKE ANOTHER REQUEST.

(Because, I'm a GREEDY!kuma)

Pairing: KakaAnko

Prompt: Car keys. Sandals. Headphones.

Pairing: NaruSasuSaku (THREESOME! FTW!)

Prompt: Kittens. Fireworks. "Look! The sun!"

(I'm sorry. Kuma was being very greedy now. These ones can wait a while. Kuma doesn't mind.)

Aw, Kiba is so sweet! Sasuke's just a mean sour young-ish guy...

It was different from the stories i've read but in a good way. Good job on it. Ubdate soon

:)

This is cute!

Very interesting, and just curious, when are you going to update vitaminwater. I hope i don't sound impatient or anything. :3