this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

Cute story, most enjoyable.

I hope to see more of your work.

Dad gave away his little girl to someone who loves her very much and throughout it all, here, it came across very well for James Possible (at your capable hands, that is).

Good mix of memory, dialogue and activity between the fam and the guests to this party.

Enjoyed your tale babbitrulez, awaiting your sequel.

CajunBear73

Loved the areso precious when they are 3,4,5, etc without a care in the world except for eskimo kisses at night. One of the days my lil girl is going to put me thru the same thing, lol.

A sweet tale with just the right amount of comedy. Well done!

Crisis averted, Dad the peacemaker, the young couple's makeup session going into overtime, and Ron had better NEVER EVER go that brain dead again with presents like that again... But he's Ron, so I guess there'll be other sitch's like that down the road.

James really rallied, against his over-protective tendencies towards his little Kimmie-cub, and saved the wedding and relationship with those two. Experience is such a hard learning process, huh?

After sleep memories of himself and his daughter from her first day in his life, and on through the days the man who would stand beside her formed in his dreams, he takes part in one last bonding moment with Kim as the new day dawns in their lives.

James really came through for his Kimmie-cub. Now to the passing of a family torch.

CB73

I have never saw the movie but your tale is interesting and well done.

Here comes the bride

all dressed in white, with bare midrift.

Booyyaah

Ja ne

Jim

I love this story and in my case its true that you your lil princess no matter how old as your lil princess.

Ah, great great chapter. Loved the transitions and such between moments.

The very end... wedding off? Oh no. What did Ron do now.. [ Or maybe his parents. I'm not sure how your story is as far as the Stoppables being portrayed.

I'm excited for the next chapter!

Good moment to moment passage of time in this chapter.

From Dad going crazy and coming down, thanks to Anne's shock therapy (or else!), through the planning and fleshing out of the wedding to come, to the basketball game and it's moment, then the last presents from the Possible's to the engaged couple.

Now Kim's gone to Ron's house, so close to the date, and comes back telling all to shutdown the wedding? Something with Ron's mom, I believe, may have caused this turn of events...

CB73

I like the story, it's interesting to see that from Dr.P's side.

Heartbroken? Intriguing hook indeed,can't wait for next chapter.

You capture the spirit of the movie and KP quite well.

Awaiting the next chapter.

Foot in mouth

Pride of a Possible who can jump to conslusion

Uh-oh

Looks like Dad to the rescue

Ja ne

Jim

Meet the Stockers?

No, just doesn't quite work

Nice chapter

Ja ne

Jim