Wow! I usually don't go for first-person fic, but you did a really good job at writing Malik's voice. And Ryou's reactions were perfect. All and all very good.

Are there really only 8 reviews for this? It's really well written so I don't understand why there aren't more, but I guess that's for you.

I really liked this! The characterizations, the pacing, the mood, even the length gives it that dimension that really lets it pop up from the page. It's a really nice piece of work! Keep up the great writing :3

cool, angstshipping. They are kinda alike

This is written very well, I really like it!

This is where to trail lead to. You would've known that had you finished your Scooby Snack. :|

YOOHOO I FOUND YOU. Anyway, this is super flufftastic super special. I'm looking forward to reading some of your longer ones, too.

meep! i've been neglecting you lately! (sorry! XD) ...PLEASE DON'T SHOOT ME AGAIN! *hides behind Kura* you wouldn't shoot him, wouldja?!
Bakura: wtf?! What if she DOES shoot me?!
yamihikari: then that's your problem! XD
Bakura: -_-'
yamihikari: anyway, this was really cool! ...definately different from your others, but cool! It was kinda sweet, actually.
Atemu: there should be a sequel!
yamihikari: *chants* sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel!
Bakura: SHUT UP! *pushes yamihikari out to be shot*
yamihikari: meep! *hides* SEQUEL! XD this story is deserving of one!

Crap? Far from it! I love it. =] Very fuzzy. Kudos to you.

Great story, I really enjoyed reading this. Well done!

Aww~ cute! Great job, especially for a middle-of-the-night job. ^^

Aww it was soo fluffy, nice and friendship like.. The warmth of this blossoming bond reminded me of when you wet yourself; everyone can see it, but only you can feel it's warmth.

Thanks for being the ** in my pants.. LOL

Your heart was so not into it, there was no sex! LOL j/k

It was really well written and flowed very naturally. I really enjoyed it. You still suck for not giving me Malik. :P