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| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 20, | abuseYAY for Bogg! He did it! Injury & all. :) THat was so nice of Bogg to bring Kayla to Vinnie's wedding, & it was time for her to meet the folks, ya know. Me no like Dwight & Lorna - they certainly are BAD BAD PEOPLE! But I have a feeling that we have not seen the last of them...lol OMG - Drake & the Titanic...ROFLOL...YAY FOR DEAD DRAKE! Paradox is SO going DOWN! Mrs. Bogg, this was an AWESOME story! I LOVED IT :) p.s. ACTUALLY its now time for me to move onto VA2 - can't wait to reread that one! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 19, | abuseGET OUT!! I was so on the edge of my chair with this one (could ya hear me screaming...lol) You would so think that Bogg would listen to Jeff by now, when he says something's wrong...THEN IT WRONG!! John Henry cracks me up - swatting at imaginary mosquitos...lol He does make for a Good voyager and a good ally for Bogg. OMG - Drake doing that to my poor Jeffy :( Just imagine if he succeeded with his plan :O WAIT...BOGG TOOK THE BOMBS AND DISAPPEARED...WHAT! OMG - OK..can I breathe yet! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 18, | abuseHA HA...Omniotosis...ROFLMBOPIMP! CLASSIC! TOO FUNNY :P Jeff is getting to worked up over this one ~ there is so much that they need to plan to make NOT happen. Maybe Bogg should have given him a, well you know ::ahem::..DOH! EW! Lorna and Drake are behind this scheme - I DON'T like this talk of getting back at Bogg and Pioneer :O It's getting so ANGSTY - LOVIN' IT! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 17, | abuseOf course Drake would use THAT as a password! Only a few people would know that one! He's NOT as sneaky as he thinks he is...he is SO GOING DOWN!! AW!! The Radio Flyer. Can't think of a better thing to know. :) OMG the BRIDGE is missing? Now that's a RED LIGHT if I ever heard of one. Looking forward to reading onward! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 16, | abuseWhat's Kayla got up her sleeve with the mysterious box? HOW did she get those? YIPPEAH it's time for the 'YAHOOS" - WOOT WOOT!! They certainly put together a GREAT group of people for the team! :O ;) They seems like they will do a superb job in taking down Paradox! p.s. Jeremy was NEVER a geek ;) DOH! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 15, | abuseHA HA the holding cells are like hotel rooms...this way Mr. Bogg, cell 125...ROFLOL! Granted this is a REAL cell at all! LOL! YAY for Garth, Kane and Brendall~they made the 'Green Light choice' in not banishing Bogg to a unchartered island ~ and making him the head hancho of Pioneer! I always knew that Jeff had great things planned for him and this just adds to it ;) GREAT CHAPTER! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abuseGreat...just Great! They fix what Drake mess up and now he's getting punished for it! I sure hope that the tribunal sees that he was doing a goot thing! Jeff is so going to FREAK when he finds this one out!! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 13, | abuseAW! Just a fun dinner (it's all about food...lol) and catching up with the family! Bogg's family seems so nice! O*M*G!! The omni has a TIME REVERSAL code! O*M*G! WOW! He is surely going to get in trouble for this one~even if Drake was the one who cause History to go track! Were did they go? Can't wait to keep reading! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 12, | abuseThat's it...make me break out the hankerchiefs! :) What a touching scene between Phineas and Sonora. I can only imagine the heartache she had at his disappearance so many years before! Great chapter! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 11, | abuseROFLOL...can't ya just see Phineas acting all drunk and stupid on the street to get the guards attention to get them to the pub. OMG - he dressed like a priest to get in...oddly familiar perhaps? Jeremy's reaction of traveling thru time really is HYSTERICAL! I feel bad for Kayla - that was SO NOT right for him to do that to her - granted he had an important 'fish to fry' in getting to Jeff...but still! p.s. 1/2 way thru...WOO HOO :( ROFLOL! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 10, | abuseIt always amazed me that no matter where they went - they always found zomeone who zpoke zee english language...lol! This assignment is so going to be a piece of cake! Loved the idea to use Barras and the French Revolution! Looking forwards to see how these three manage to fix the 'red light' of this one! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 9, | abuseI can't think of a better companion for Jeff right now that Vinchenzo! He most certainly will be able to give Jeff the low-down on what Phineas was like BEFORE he became a Voyager! Jeff is in good hands right now! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 8, | abuseJeremy is so sweet and nice - he makes for a good friend for Kayla. I love the line about Drake - "You mean aside from sugary cakes?" ROFLMBO! Now who is this "yahoo" Lorna - she seems so evil. OMG ~ what is with all the SLAPPING...DOH! :) This chapter was so angsty - LOVE IT! That was a great idea that Bogg had to use a replica omni with no memory! That pirate sure is smart! |
| spencerthekat 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abuseThis chapter was so chockful of information! Finally an small answer to why Bogg is having those dreams. Kayla's a fiesty one ~ ain't she! Sounds like Bogg's going to have his hands full with her! ;) p.s. - "She shook her head sadly to think what a waste of a beautiful life it would have been had Phineas died, so young with so much more to accomplish." ~ :: le sigh:: :( |
| Morgan Elizebeth Jacobs 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseHow does Kayla become older from an eight year old child in 24 hours? I don't understand that part. Unless I missed something when reading the first couple of chapters. |