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| TheMadPuppy 2008-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseYou're like, the most horrible tease of all universes. Seriously, it's a crime to lure us into such a sensual and soft atmosphere just to let us down the minute he finally rise to kiss her! ARG. My fav paragraph: "The evening had been otherworldly and beautiful; the almost supernatural quality of their encounters rapidly becoming familiar to her. It was less a kiss from a rose than a slow, dragging lick from a poppy, and Mina felt deliriously lost in it. She had gradually learned not to fear him, even as every part of her body screamed that he was somehow a creature as different from her as water was to blood. She had always seen the predator's stalk in his eyes, but now she could see so much more than that as he caressed her with words and images of intense and eternal feeling." Holy. You gave "intoxicated by danger" a whole new feeling. I didn't feel an adrenaline rush but the noose of a velvet rope. In one word: beautiful. The choices of words was exquisite. Wet flower, unclosed heart...wow. Thanks for the read. I need to see Dracula again so bad now! |
| elizabethlives 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseahh that's my favorite movie ever! my fan fic is kinda like but not as good do more please! |
| bitemebeezlebub 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was incredibly beautiful, thank you so much! |
| Nightcrawlerlover 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWow - very brilliant! I love the kiss from a rose part. It reminds me of the song "A Kiss from a Rose" by Seal. Keep up the awesome, lovely work, as always. |
| flamethrowerqueen 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseSuch a tease, Thyme! I think I found that more intoxicating than dear Mina did. Your descriptions were beautiful and entrancing, and took me exactly where Mina was. Brilliant. |
| DarkPriestessofAssimbya 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseYour prose is beautiful and sensual, and even though these characterizations are not ones I'll ever really be comfortable with, I enjoyed this story greatly. |
| Leah Day 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseLovely! |
| antipodkayne 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous. You really can write! |
| Windjammers 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseIncredibly moving. I am absolutely hooked. I don't want these little one-shots to end. |